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themadpoet — Of Love And Lust
Published: 2001-05-25 21:58:27 +0000 UTC; Views: 133; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 56
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Description OF LOVE AND LUST
 
LIKE A FLOWER IN THE DEAD OF WINTER
WAITING FOR SPRING TO MAKE IT BLOOM
YOU SAT ALONE WAITING FOR PASSION
A BURNING LOVE THAT WOULD CONSUME
AND WHEN IT CAME AND HELD YOU TIGHT
AN EMBRACE SO WARM IT MADE YOUR SOUL CRY
IT GRABBED YOUR HEART AND FILLED IT WITH LUST
AND OTHER FEELINGS THAT YOU COULDN’T DENY
WITH MOISTURE WELLING FROM PLACES LONG KEPT PRIVATE
AND A PASSION GONE WAY BEYOND CONTROL
YOU GRABBED THE SUN AND BROUGHT IT INSIDE YOU
TO BRIGHTEN THE DARKNESS OF YOUR LONELY SOUL
MOMENT BY MOMENT AS IT STROKED DEEP INTO YOUR LUST
PROMISING THE RELEASE THAT YOU NEED AND DESIRE
YOUR MIND WAITS FOR THE INEVITABLE RELEASE
SO THAT IT TOO MAY BE CONSUMED BY THE FIRE
AND AS YOUR BODY FULFILS ITS NEEDS
YOUR MIND COMPLETELY LOSES CONTROL
AS PASSION PLUNGES DEEPER INTO YOUR BODY
AND EXPLODES AS IT REACHES YOUR SOUL
PASSIONS COMBINE AS SEXUAL RELEASE IS ACHIEVED
TWO SOULS WANDER, ONCE AGAIN SET FREE
ALL THAT IS LEFT IS A WARM EMBRACE
AND PASSION BURNS TO THE THIRD DEGREE
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Comments: 2

dor [2001-09-19 02:03:25 +0000 UTC]

okay I'm gonna be brave and say it... you asked for it! this is the "only one" I did not connect w/ it just don't spark anything at all... and I don't even know why, so I cannot tell you, but you asked for it! hehe (not much help at all but the truth anyways)
(and those CAPS are driving me crazy!)
okay me is running from you now....


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themadpoet [2001-05-27 01:13:56 +0000 UTC]



how can a poem get this many views and no comments even if it's bad please comment....the reason i submit them here is to get input on how to improve my poetry (other than learning how to type)....i already have someplace to display them

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