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Published: 2001-08-29 18:34:47 +0000 UTC; Views: 111; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 27
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Description SILENT AND BEAUTIFUL
By
Mark A. Brickey

Silent and beautiful she walks the night
Bringing joy to the depths of my empty soul
Searching for the dream that haunts her sleep
the person to whom her virtue she can extol

Gracing me with her presence in my dreams
Filling my nights with so much pleasure
Leaving my heart full to the brim
My mind full of memories to treasure

Her beauty radiates the warmth of the sun
But her heart still needs to feel the touch
Of someone that will tell her how lovely she is
And that he loves her so very, very much

When that day arrives a flower will bloom
A beautiful bird will take off in its first flight
A spirit will be let loose to roam free on this earth
she will become a lovely flower of the night

Her voice will ring out loud and pure
Her soul will no longer need to cry
She will have found the meaning of her life
Knowing i will be hers until the day i die
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Comments: 5

daishi [2001-08-30 08:18:14 +0000 UTC]

this makes me smile... ah, love...

Wonderfully written, 'tis one of my favorites... keep writing

Come visit me at https://daishi.deviantart.com

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aftershock522 [2001-08-29 22:58:44 +0000 UTC]


I hope this lady allows you into her world. I have no doubts that you would make her truly happy and fulfill all her wants, needs, and desires.

This is very beautiful......thank you
(but you could have done without the picture since i am so very shy)

aftershock

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matrix7 [2001-08-29 20:22:36 +0000 UTC]

Heh, Rachel seems to be in an "adoring" mood lately *elbows Rach*

Great poem though, I like it! very tight, yet loose. Cool, yet hot. Dark, yet filled with light.

**Insert other oxymorons here**

Heh, later man. Keep writing. Cool nick, I like it.

:::Matrix7:::


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faithwalker [2001-08-29 19:09:29 +0000 UTC]

sanguru said it all!

Faithwalker

Grow

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sanguru [2001-08-29 18:54:59 +0000 UTC]

Wonderful poem. I adore it, there's so much emotion, many thoughts.... unbelievable. Well put, all of it so well written. I love it so much. keep up the great work.

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question silence.

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