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Published: 2001-06-18 23:33:08 +0000 UTC; Views: 264; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 172
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Description The Fall of An Angel
By
Mark A. Brickey


Tears tracing glistening moments of sadness
Crossing cheeks so soft and sweet
Displaying her emotion for all to see
A battle rages and happiness cant compete

Despair has taken control of her heart
Sadness is in charge of her mind
How could this sweet angel have lost control?
How could love have made her so blind?

She had stayed on that lofty perch
With her virtue placed way up high
Protecting her innocence from loves deadly touch
Fearing it and yet not knowing why

Could it be the feelings of love out of control?
The pure lust that permeates her heart
The warmth that penetrates deep into her spirit
Or the passion that she felt right from the start

As he gazed longingly into her dark eyes
She knew that her heart was lost
That she would hold him all through the night
The price didn't matter she would pay what it cost

She would become a fallen angel
A soul lost in the grips of true love
Little did she know that this was not so
It was a gift from the heavens above
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Comments: 4

snipersock [2002-03-07 10:04:42 +0000 UTC]

The verse is great but so is the picture. Where did you find that?
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Its good to keep your words soft and sweet, just in case you have to eat them.

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dor [2001-09-16 05:30:37 +0000 UTC]

Did you do that picture???

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dor [2001-09-16 05:26:49 +0000 UTC]

OMG & how does a man get words such as these??? you are amazing w/ your words, this is totally beautiful

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cooper [2001-06-19 02:26:33 +0000 UTC]

Simply but, marvelous. The words, form, imagery, all of it is put together to enrapture me in a dream world, with ur words flowing past me on gentle breezing clouds, take care and keep writing my friend.

@coop@

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