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Elbenlady-Elanor [2018-10-13 22:17:17 +0000 UTC]

What software do you use? I recommend a free trial of Painter Essentials 6 to get started. Later buy it or even upgrade to full Painter. It is not expensive and the best for working traditional art on PC. Also it is super easy to use. 

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MsTeraLn [2018-10-06 09:22:05 +0000 UTC]

OMG! You REALLY DID this? This is AMAZING for just joining deviantART this week!

Welcome aboard and I'll get to your Comment about Dark Sun later. Anyway, I will be Watching you from now on, as long as you Watch me back!

Don't forget to Fave and Comment on the rest of my art as well!

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Kara-Yami [2018-10-05 21:31:14 +0000 UTC]

Wow, so much improvement just from the last time!! I absolutely love the background. Usually I would say the flowers in the foreground need a little more detail, but I think they worked perfectly. She I absolutely gorgeous! Her face shape is pretty good, its a little iffy once we get to the lips and chin area for the shape, but it still isn't really noticeable. just keep in mind that the curve there is really important to get the angle to look right. There should be more shade where the hair and the face meet, that will help show depth and separation between the two, but also show that they are apart of the same picture. Her eyes are stunning. You already took what I mentioned about the lashes and did such an amazing job! The make up is okay. On the eye lid it looks nice. Some would say its to bright, but with modern day make up the usage of highlights, it very much could be that bright. Also the lighting also helps. Around the eye lid, needs to be much more blended. Those lips are gorgeous. The hair look really good in some places, but in others its lacking a little. I would reconsider hair going all the way through the face, just for composition reason. The hair is a little messy and rough in some areas, but you do have the general idea of flow. the thinner strands that are lighter and going through the lips and such, I would get rid of that all together. Overall, you are improving at an impressive rate, and its just the small things that will help from here. ^-^ 
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Alyssare [2018-10-05 20:46:25 +0000 UTC]

Okaay so im not a good person to give advice in the first place, but why not~

I feel like the lights are a little bit too heavy or just not blended enough. Near mouth it isnt that obvious, but near eyes - too much contrast in my opinion. I love the placement of shading tho - the nose and the area near it looks really great! But I feel like the reddish shade near her left eye looks a little bit like the eyebrow sooo... idk if its good. Probably not.

I think the colors - as much as in the last piece - are really nice, especially when I look at the flowers.

Anddd I think the edges of the girl are really sharp on her chest - I feel like its because of the technique, but cant be sure.

Buuut in the end all i see is a really thought out artpiece, so congrats <3

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