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TheMindOfNemily — The Adventures of Harriet Potter: Year 4 - Ch41

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Description *ominous music plays*

It was *just* too long to post... here's the link to AO3: archiveofourown.org/works/2798…

Cover art by Xijalle

All other characters and locations property of J.K. Rowling.

Original concept by Night-Miner  and littlebityamelie

Proof reading/editting by Night-Minerlittlebityamelie  and E-HIndigo

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Comments: 43

Owner308 [2016-12-18 11:34:43 +0000 UTC]

That ending was quite the suprise

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TheMindOfNemily In reply to Owner308 [2016-12-18 12:10:08 +0000 UTC]

with more to come.

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Owner308 In reply to TheMindOfNemily [2016-12-19 20:41:20 +0000 UTC]

*ominous music plays* What you mean like? www.youtube.com/watch?v=wKfMW9…

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TheMindOfNemily In reply to Owner308 [2016-12-19 20:59:33 +0000 UTC]

Nah, more like this:
www.youtube.com/watch?v=a1Y73s…

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Owner308 In reply to TheMindOfNemily [2016-12-19 21:58:16 +0000 UTC]

Heh, that got a good chuckle out of me.
You stay you Kleinnak

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TheMindOfNemily In reply to Owner308 [2016-12-19 22:17:35 +0000 UTC]

you're lucky... I came damn close to rick-rolling you :-P

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Ciaxlia [2016-11-28 02:35:48 +0000 UTC]

AAAAAAAAAAAAH I CANT WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER. I NEED IT SO BAD. AMAZING JOB. OH JEEZ SO AMAZING I CANT WAIT.

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TheMindOfNemily In reply to Ciaxlia [2016-11-28 03:47:08 +0000 UTC]

Awwwwww. I'll try and get to it soon. Work was busy today so not much writing So glad you're so excited though.

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Ciaxlia In reply to TheMindOfNemily [2016-11-28 05:26:08 +0000 UTC]

No rush. Poetic beauty takes time.

But sooooooo super excited! I wanna know everyone's reactions!!!!!!

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TheMindOfNemily In reply to Ciaxlia [2016-11-28 07:14:26 +0000 UTC]

gawwwww jeez... make me blush again...

soon soon

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KiriMaka94 [2016-11-28 01:47:07 +0000 UTC]

WHAT IS GOING ON????!!!!!!

And where is the rest of it???!!!!

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TheMindOfNemily In reply to KiriMaka94 [2016-11-28 02:31:36 +0000 UTC]

the rest of...? did it not all display??

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KiriMaka94 In reply to TheMindOfNemily [2016-11-29 01:12:09 +0000 UTC]

Of course if did! I just want to read the rest of the story, I want the next chapter.

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TheMindOfNemily In reply to KiriMaka94 [2016-11-29 01:12:52 +0000 UTC]

Haha, working on it as we speak and some questions will be answered :-P

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KahoriFutunaka [2016-11-27 19:22:07 +0000 UTC]

I finally catched up and right now I am just like e.deviantart.net/emoticons/n/n…

I mean... FOR HEAVEN'S SAKE, SO MANY THINGS HAPPENING! And so many creepy things, too. Especially Barty Junior. I think he has gone completely nuts now. Or as we say in German: Er hat wirklich nicht mehr alle Tassen im Schrank! (He really hasn't all cups in the cupboard anymore!)

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TheMindOfNemily In reply to KahoriFutunaka [2016-11-27 20:53:54 +0000 UTC]

hahaha, momagie below used that one a lot too :-P

Things are really heating up for sure It'd be terrible if more things changed because of all this, wouldn't it?

Haha, we have similar sayings here, like "a few cards short of a full deck."

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Night-Miner In reply to KahoriFutunaka [2016-11-27 20:10:41 +0000 UTC]

He is several fries short of a McHappy Meal!

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MissSapphireRose [2016-11-27 19:07:38 +0000 UTC]

OH MY GOSH, YOU MADE ME SO HAPPY! CEDRIC DIDN'T DIE!

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TheMindOfNemily In reply to MissSapphireRose [2016-11-27 20:54:23 +0000 UTC]

Nope... but what might this mean for convincing people that Voldemort's back, now there's no proof at all that anything happened other than Harriet's word...?

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MissSapphireRose In reply to TheMindOfNemily [2016-11-27 23:14:34 +0000 UTC]

True. I'm about to publish a new chapter for my original series. It's book 9, and it's 6,726 words.

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TheMindOfNemily In reply to MissSapphireRose [2016-11-27 23:22:22 +0000 UTC]

great work

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MissSapphireRose In reply to TheMindOfNemily [2016-11-27 23:28:45 +0000 UTC]

And...it's up! Check it out!

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Leopold002 [2016-11-27 14:58:44 +0000 UTC]

So Voldemort has returned. And Kinney was there in the graveyard. He replaced Cedric. Whatever will happen now? How will Fudge react? Looking forward to Chapter 42.

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TheMindOfNemily In reply to Leopold002 [2016-11-27 15:06:22 +0000 UTC]

*ominous music plays*
shouldn't be long

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Leopold002 In reply to TheMindOfNemily [2016-11-27 17:51:45 +0000 UTC]

Looking forward to it.

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Momagie [2016-11-27 11:17:30 +0000 UTC]

Voldemort is back Fly, you fools!!!
(Oops wrong story... )

Something bothers me: Kinney saw Harriet AND Finn together I don't like it!
Something else bothers me: the way Crouch Jr addressed Harriet "My lady" O_o It mades me shiver. Brrr. It's like having a weird old uncle calling you "My princesse" and being really tactile with you. I don't like it. Nor the fact he managed to use the imperius curse on her.

Basically, both chapters had been a really huge moments ^^

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TheMindOfNemily In reply to Momagie [2016-11-27 14:31:19 +0000 UTC]

Haha nice

Yep... can't imagine that'll come back at any point

Haha, well, he's supposed to be creepy, he's a villain :-P

Well he didn't really technically imperius her... technically he was jsut using it to communicate with her without lord voldemort knowing. she could have thrown it off any any time, but it was more prudent to "play along"

oh yes... i had lots of fun writing this

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Momagie In reply to TheMindOfNemily [2016-11-27 17:42:24 +0000 UTC]

Thanks xD

It WILL come back at a point. Right?

Even! He's still even more creepy. She's fourteen!

Ooooh yeah I see. I was a little confused :/
But, even Kinney told her to "play along"... what was the point of the two? Helping her? For what purpose?

I have no doubt about it ^^

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TheMindOfNemily In reply to Momagie [2016-11-27 20:57:35 +0000 UTC]

haha time will tell

Well he doesn't think about her romantically :-P but it is a very different relationship dynamic than the one he had with Voldemort, for sure. Crouch, Jr went to voldemort when voldemort was already powerful. Harriet is only just starting to learn her powers, and so she needs 'guidance' in getting there.

Haha it's okay. Well... Dumbledore, Morrisey and Howe said that Crouch is working with Kinney. It's possible Kinney was putting one over on Voldemort and the Death Eaters just as much as Crouch, Jr was. I suppose we'll have to wait and see if they reveal their true plans

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Momagie In reply to TheMindOfNemily [2016-11-29 17:36:56 +0000 UTC]

As always ^^

You say that basically, he's admiring her, right? Or he sees himself as a mentor so she can be the most powerful wich in the world?
Rha, can't wait to see what is their plan indeed.

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TheMindOfNemily In reply to Momagie [2016-11-29 17:51:17 +0000 UTC]

yeah a bit more like that. He thinks she can be more powerful than Voldemort. She's more inspiring, an yet still at a point in her life where he can mould her and guide her to be the powerful leader he wants.

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Momagie In reply to TheMindOfNemily [2016-11-29 18:08:52 +0000 UTC]

That's more or less what I understood (thanks to your guidance )

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TheMindOfNemily In reply to Momagie [2016-11-29 18:25:56 +0000 UTC]

lol good good

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mikaela2015 [2016-11-27 08:26:53 +0000 UTC]

WOAH!!!

Just read both chapters

Simply amazing!!!
Both the challenge and when Harriet sees her parents were my favourite parts.

Awesome job!!!

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TheMindOfNemily In reply to mikaela2015 [2016-11-27 08:44:59 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! Glad you enjoyed them so! Yeah, I enjoyed the moment with Lily and James as well but i don't know if I could pick a favourite. I had so much fun with all aspects.

Thanks again

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dragonheart876 [2016-11-27 08:17:02 +0000 UTC]

AMAZING CHAPTER!! The BEST compliment that I can think of right now is that the last two chapters were way better than what J.K wrote.❤

I loved the graveyard scene specially! Crouch Jr was great in helping harriet as much as he could. It's obvious what he meant by "play along " and I'm really really excited to see what you've got in store for him and harriet. He has already become a "villan- hero " kinda character for me for playing his part so well, no matter the reason!!!! Btw did he escape too!?

I'm really curious to know why exactly did James gave that apology for Daniel!OMG I'm sure Daniel must have been panicked the whole time since Cedric's unconscious form was discovered in the changing rooms! I'm glad Cedric didn't die

The chapter was ominous enough without any deaths!

Harriet successfully bested Voldemort twice in the graveyard! Yaaayyyyy!There can be no better confidence booster, I'm sure

Aww the Finn/harriet moment Was so damn cute! ❤ ❤

So much more to talk about...... Will continue later

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TheMindOfNemily In reply to dragonheart876 [2016-11-27 08:43:38 +0000 UTC]

Thanks I loved writing them both so much. I couldn't stop once I'd started.  Wow... that's definitely high praise indeed...

Glad you liked our new developments with Crouch, Jr He's definitely got an interesting road ahead of him... (aka, yes he escaped )

Well, if you read back in Y3, during their conversation in the Shrieking Shack before revealing Pettigrew, it's revealed that James suspected that Daniel was the spy. Remus thought it was Sirius, Sirius thought it was Remus, James thought it was Daniel, and Daniel thought it was Pettigrew. So... James was apologizing to Daniel, who's taken such good care and shown James' daughter such love.

Yep... wonder how this will affect Voldemort later on...

Thanks I do enjoy writing them. Wonder what it might mean that Fleur wasn't able to charm Finn...

Can't wait to hear

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dragonheart876 In reply to TheMindOfNemily [2016-11-27 09:11:34 +0000 UTC]

Well I'm really looking forward to read more about Crouch Jr. I really wish that Harriet atleast gives him a chance to explain his side because I'm sure he's going to return back to her soon enough! I hope he has not gone totally insane btw, lol.

Oh Yea yea right, I totally forgot about it. Wonder how Daniel will take it once harriet conveys the message!!

I'm truly curious as well! Harriet just proved whatever crouch told her about her strength and power to be true by besting the dark lord in the duel!

Well it means that he probably *REALLY * likes someone badly enough for the veela charms to not affect him!? Is he even a muggle for sure ?!

The arrival of those dragon-horse kinda creatures at the end was surprising. We've got new mysteries to stew over, joy!!!

The changes with the maze were nice. How did harriet's bogart change? Is it even possible?! I'm sure Daniel is going to very flattered if he comes to know what harriet's greatest fear Is.

I wonder how will harriet prove that Voldemort's back to everyone without any evidence! There's no dead Cedric that can really make others believe that something did happen in the maze. And somehow I feel that Harriet stunning Kanzuri is going to create some problems for her! OMG I'm so excited for the aftermath now

Now two more chapters left, right? I can't believe that it's almost over I hope that you update soon again! Afterall, You're the one who has spoiled us with two consecutive double updates

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SBishoptheBard In reply to dragonheart876 [2016-11-28 06:26:50 +0000 UTC]

Lol I don't know if I'd call the "dragon-horse" creatures a mystery. Don't you remember the creatures in the books who fit that description, only visible by those who knowingly witness death?  

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dragonheart876 In reply to SBishoptheBard [2016-11-30 09:33:51 +0000 UTC]

Haha, yeah got it! They're the thestrals. I was way too excited with the other events going on that I didn't understand that part the first time properly xD
It was very smoothly written though!

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TheMindOfNemily In reply to dragonheart876 [2016-11-27 09:22:31 +0000 UTC]

Well he might not be quite there but he is at least in the ballpark :-P

I guess we'll see

Yep, she's proved her power... right in front of all his death eaters... now voldemort might doubt his own strengths... while also losing his death eater's confidence...

Hmmmm that could be . And yes, he is a muggle. and no, it's not because he's a muggle :-P this one might take a couple books to resolve, haha.

Lol, those were thestrals. Harriet had seen death... and thus the thestrals became visible .

Harriet's biggest fear changed. She now has a true, loving family that she's afraid of losing. Notice how she's changed in just a year. In year 3, she vowed she'd die rather than switch to the dark arts. now she'll "play along" if it means a chance to get back to them.

That'll definitely be something interesting for book 5 to deal with, eh? more and more, the changes build nad build, pushing us farther and farther from canon. Well... i'm sure harriet can think of some way of making amends .

Haha should be soon. A small part of me does want to save the final chapter for the anniversary of Y4's beginning in a couple weeks.

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dragonheart876 In reply to TheMindOfNemily [2016-11-27 09:51:29 +0000 UTC]

I wonder how many people will change their allegiance now like crouch Jr. ...

It's gonna take a couple books? Woah, it must be something important then!?

Ohh yeah I read the chapter (again) and I got the thestral part! Nice transition btw!Very well written

I can definitely say that I like this new harriet! The one who's not afraid to fire spells first and ask questions later

Bu-but..... That's like almost 3 weeks away
December 20th around right? You're not going to make us wait that looooonggg, are you?! *crying my eyes out *

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TheMindOfNemily In reply to dragonheart876 [2016-11-27 14:32:28 +0000 UTC]

Maybe not at first... but eventually...

Lol,, maybe not so much important as... well we'll just have to see :-P

thanks! I put a lot of thought into it .

Nope, she's driven and determined

Awwwww *gives a cookie*

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