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themistsayshello — Nostalgic Wax
Published: 2007-09-01 04:33:31 +0000 UTC; Views: 251; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 3
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Fly me away fromthis cold reality
Take me away
where you’ll never have to hide
where I’ll never need
to wish
Ride on the bows
of porpoise fins, skim our
toes on grassy mountain peaks
forget what the rest of them
wanted from us
what I thought you wanted
from me
all we’ll have to do
is be
If all I’ll ever have is
a nod, a look
Just give me one more
Before you’re gone
Just one more
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Comments: 7
Beautiful. I can't quite put to words what I like about this poem, but the feeling that the poem invokes just captures me.
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Kinda reminds me, or I get the feeling that the one telling the "story" is trying to confess his/her love to somone and at the same time tell them goodbye... To me it's a good poem as it goes into the depths of how hard it is to say those last words - "Before you're gone... Just one more." It's hard to confess that you still appreciate hwo close someone has been to you.
Nice work!
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thanks... I have to say you rather hit the spot there.
*hides a furtive, mysterious look*
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Well, It's always hard, but we've all been there.
-Hugs that furtive, mysterious look-
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Very thought provoking, once again. I guess this proves that the saying 'good things take time' is true
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very true.
except if you wait too long it expires and then all you have is rotten mush and good memories.
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Well you could always attract pigs with the rotten mush...or maybe rats
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