Comments: 67
ThePerpetualBliss In reply to ??? [2011-03-30 03:09:08 +0000 UTC]
....there's is an Epilouge you know..
It tells what happens after..
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sexystar9518 [2011-02-07 20:22:03 +0000 UTC]
Woah. is this the last one? It can't just end this way. This is crazy, i wonder if this actually happens in real life...?
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ravebloodnymph [2010-12-05 21:24:51 +0000 UTC]
..................................................
WHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!
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leavemealone24 [2010-08-13 01:52:47 +0000 UTC]
(sniff) you basterd
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FallingEdge [2010-06-27 05:25:20 +0000 UTC]
Fucking cried, man ;s;
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Cheshire-Shadow [2010-02-17 13:32:47 +0000 UTC]
A little disturbing, but it was a good story overall.
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CatzandDogz12345 [2010-01-18 19:59:52 +0000 UTC]
Ahhh... So sad, but really good story! I like how instead of some happy fairy tale ending, you were real and showed how it really happens. You my friend are a realist.
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ThePerpetualBliss In reply to CatzandDogz12345 [2010-01-18 20:04:09 +0000 UTC]
Lol, why thank you
but before you say anything else, you may want to read the Epilogue.
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HallowedHeroine [2010-01-18 18:31:46 +0000 UTC]
The ending was very fitting to the story, but I couldn't help but love Harley's character.
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ThePerpetualBliss In reply to wildbay972 [2010-01-18 18:18:43 +0000 UTC]
Lol
no slave could have been that strong. not against 10 grown men with guns.
They only picked the little weak slaves to bring back with them
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wildbay972 In reply to ThePerpetualBliss [2010-01-18 20:26:35 +0000 UTC]
WELLLL he could have lookeedd weak but be strong and then have magical powers?? lololololoo;llol
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ThePerpetualBliss In reply to wildbay972 [2010-01-18 20:37:07 +0000 UTC]
Lol, no
No mystical properties in this story, maybe the next one..
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Renji910 [2010-01-18 17:37:07 +0000 UTC]
HOLY CRAP!!! WHY?!?!
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Renji910 In reply to ThePerpetualBliss [2010-01-18 17:57:02 +0000 UTC]
NO IT DIDN'T!! I demand a aternative(sp) ending!!
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Renji910 In reply to ThePerpetualBliss [2010-01-18 18:31:09 +0000 UTC]
Sorry just thought that it would be a happy ending but good job loved the story
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Soleste81 [2010-01-18 14:34:52 +0000 UTC]
*sighs* I hate being right......... you killed them both! you.. meanie!
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