TheLaughingGiant In reply to TheProfBurg [2017-11-01 16:48:06 +0000 UTC]
Hm, let's see.
First, there's her face. It looks like one of a serpent beast. Like she thrives primarily on instinct.
Gives the feeling that she doesn't care who you are. She'll still kill you.
Secondly, the attire. ("Mars isn't the only planet with two moons".)
In all seriousness, I feel like I'm looking at a Kijo or demoness wearing that outfit. It fits so well I think I'd be
stuck in thinking whether to look away or look at her.
Thirdly, the backstory. Something about it adds more weight to the character.
As in, her reasons are more clear and the reasons behind her dark descent
makes it all the more tragic. You'd want to save her but the way she acts
makes you worried that your efforts would be fruitless.
Is that good?
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TheProfBurg In reply to TheLaughingGiant [2017-11-01 16:56:04 +0000 UTC]
Actually that is perfect! I did try to make her as threatening as possible. (Truth be told I'm actually getting more positive reception for this design) But I think you summed it up rather nicely.
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