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Published: 2008-10-11 16:52:54 +0000 UTC; Views: 78; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 0
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Description Ahh…

It’s about noon
Hot as hell with the sun
directly over head,
but I’ve made five
bucks so far.

A sleek black car
Is slowing down in
Front of me.
I hear the driver side
Automatic window lowering

                                        HEY! YOU!

“Um, yeah?”

                                        Come here

Should I? It’s
Broad day light,
it’s not like he
kill me and no one
wouldn’t notice.

I get up and walk over.
Once I reach the car I bend over
To be eye to eye
With him. He has the
The deepest
yet light  brown eyes
I’ve ever seen

                                        Hey, so I have
                                         A little proposition
                                         For you.

“I’m NOT a hooker,
If that’s what you’re
Thinking, but I can point
You in the right direction”

                                        No, I don’t
                                        Want a hooker.

“WHAT THE FUCK MAN!”

Rude?… maybe.
“I’m trying to
make a living
here!”

I really should
Be nicer but he’s just
Taunting me with his
Cool air and I just want
To sit back down.

                                          Just hope in

He pushes a button
And I hear the tell-tell
sound of the locks release.

“I’m not a fucking retard!
NO!”

Truly fed up with
This guy I start to walk
Away-

                                        Just listen to me.

Wow. That wasn’t
A command but sounded
More like a plea.
What does this
Guy want?

                                         Look, can we talk
                                        Over lunch? It’ll be
                                        In a public venue.
                                        Just, please.

“Um… Fine.”
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Comments: 4

VincentsFallenAngel [2008-10-15 02:56:36 +0000 UTC]

Very nice ^^ I can;t wait to see who this guy turns out to be.

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arcthelove [2008-10-12 04:22:56 +0000 UTC]

Yay! Mysterious character is mysterious.
I'm excited to see whtere theis will go~

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TheRealEmoPrincess In reply to arcthelove [2008-10-12 17:23:26 +0000 UTC]

To be totally honest... me too

I know a general direction of where I want this story to end, but **** has not told me excatly why he's here yet

I'll have to get it out of him eventually *plots torture scheme* muhahahaha

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arcthelove In reply to TheRealEmoPrincess [2008-10-12 20:13:39 +0000 UTC]

I know what you mean. I'm terrible at planning out stories (so I usually don't write them.) They stew in my head for a while and random things will happen building on more events.

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