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Published: 2014-03-24 23:51:24 +0000 UTC; Views: 28544; Favourites: 227; Downloads: 24
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Kovu is ready for a hug ! i mean a fight...(that would be one epic hug though !)Here is a page ! pheeew ! sorry for the delay, life is a sport i'm really not good at...
So yeah, kovu to the rescue ! you probably saw it coming but i wasn't going to kill the cubs just to surprise you !
now I hope next page will come faster than this one...
good night
(oh and yeah, if anyone feel like making a constructive critique about my comic so far, i'd be happy to hear it)
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this is bye far a great and wonderful comic and i hope to be reading more soon. i am very pleased with the colors although i do believe the proportions are somewhat off and your paws are a bit too weirdly large but other than that you are pretty much perfect i mean i can't get paws rightly sized either so um yeah.
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i just needed a fillers
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thank you very much for this critique ! although i won't display it because i don't want to post a critique filled with fgbhrjk dgtkgu. i hope you understand, thank you again !
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Your Proportions on the Lion's Leg in the panel where he's saying "What the ..." is a little off. The silhouette when Kovu is pouncing onto the rough lion is well done along with the way you set up the entrance and execution of Kovu tackling the other male lion was stupendous. Along with the colors you used when Kovu is in mid jump coming at the other male was a good decision it draws attention to Kovu's dark pelt. In concussion you did a wonderful job with your comic you just need to do work on your proportions a little more.
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I Love the emotion shown in the pannels and your style so I think you should contuine what your doing, but if your looking on whys to inprove if you look at the pannel that the darker lion is saying WHat the... he's legs are out of proportion for his stance. I Love your work and I think that the thing i menchined was a one time thing good job with the series and love your work. now it's saying that there's not enought words so square square square square square square square square square pie pie pie pie pi
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thank you so much for this critique ! i'm very happy you enjoy my work and took the time to write me some advices ! i indeed have much to learn about lion's anatomy.
But maybe you should have written a comment, considering you didn't have enough words for a complete critique. This is by no mean criticism, but please understand that i'd rather not display a critique that end with "square square square pie pie pie ", for me but for you as well.
But again i'm still super grateful you took the time to write to me. thank you !
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Thank you and sorry about the ending I couldnt think of anything else to add i'll try better next time.
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Don't worry it's ok, and i am the thankful one here really.
Have a great day !
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Another nice page/panel layout here--centers the action nicely.
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Shani reminds me of Uru in albinoraven's comic Mahatu's reign when Uru met Ahadi and she she was all like "you want to hurt me? sucker please you may as well attack a rhino!" lol that was my translation when she said "I'm the princess around here and if you attack me my dad'll come and you'll be in big trouble!"
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Oh yes i see the parallel ! Its a very flattering one btw 
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I was like 1st panel: Hey aint that.... then *reads the description* Hey Kovu! X3
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Haha yeah ! Who knows maybe next page they're gonna high five !
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Hehe thanks ! I'll do my best to come up with a page !
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You are so awesome!!!! I love your work. You are one of my favorites!!!!
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aww thank you so much ! i was feeling a bit down but now you've made my day ! thank you sweetie !
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No problem. I cant get enough of this comic. Cant wait for the next page but please take your time. You have no need to rush.
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you're so awesome this kind of support means the world to me. thank you !
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Hehe thanks ! I really can't say when a new page will be ready though ...
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Yeaaaaaah!! Don't mess with Kovu's baby!!!! D:<
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That's right ! Super daddy kovu won't allow it !
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No he won't!!! He's all like 'Oh no you did-int!!' And the other guy is like 'Oh yes I di-' *Gets crushed by Kovu*
.....Or something among those lines.
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haha yes something like that !
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Je trouve cette page sympa, je ne peux pas te donner une critique car je ne me sens pas à la hauteur, mais je peux peut être te donner un conseil pour Kovu : il aurait peut être fallu lui faire les pattes plus grosses et moins écartées ^^ Sinon je trouve ça super, j'adore Kirai désolée xD
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merci pas de soucis ! et oui les pattes de kovu, ont dirait qu'elles sont toutes kiki...j'ai un peu craqué, mais fallait que je ponde une page !
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T'en fais pas ! les erreurs sont la pour apprendre, on va pas te jeter des pierres pour ça
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oui voila ! et puis je lui fais des pattes miniatures ou des ailes dans le dos si je veux ! j'ai tout les droits mwahahah !
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Exact ! nan mais oh on fait ce qu'on veut avec nos bestiaux xD
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