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TheSeeker417 — FFXIII - Serah Farron
Published: 2010-06-25 00:38:06 +0000 UTC; Views: 7699; Favourites: 157; Downloads: 0
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Hey guys! I know I haven't posted anything in a while, but I've been dreadfully busy as of late, and it doesn't look like it'll be slowing down any time soon!I just thought I'd add this photo of our lovely Sareh, please feel free to comment and leave your critiques
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Photographer *TheSeeker417
Lightning *CourtoonXIII
Snow Villiers ~OctaneBlue
Oerba Dia Vanille ~CatalystSirene
Sazh Katzroy ~Chaos5555555555
Hope Estheim *Solo-dono
Serah Farron ~lexxandra
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Comments: 26
O.k. that could b the most beautiful woman alive!
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Looks gea! There are the things I normally point out, but I think you are used to those, like the eyebrow color, and potentially the sneaky branch.
The only other thing I'm thinking is... maybe you could adjust your aperture so that the rest of her body is in focus. But the photo is realy sharp and vibrant, so really, the focus thing could be brushed off as artistic preference.
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Omg, my computer is glitching out, I meant to say Looks good! I don't even know what gea is! XD
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very nice. I have a few critiques though. First, her name is Serah Farron. not Sareh.
You did a nice job with the hair, but it should be a bit paler, a little more blond in the pink I guess =/ and the ponytail should be very wavy, almost curly, not braided like it looks you have it as.
The eye make up is lovely, but maybe try for a thiner underline. in her screenshots it shows that her underline is only partial- it doesn'tcover much. although, her eyes are much larger, and the darker line on you does give the illusion of larger eyes. So you may just want to keep as is.
The shade of eye color, while very pretty, is much too dark. Serah has "Monet Blue" eyes, very pale slightly purple blue. (like the Monet Blue Bearded Irises [link] )
Lastly, you left your eyebrows brown/black, but while hers are slightly darker than her hair, they're still pink/blond. I don't know if the idea of painting/dying/bleaching your eyebrows is out of the question or not. Seems like it's a bit extreme, but if this is your main cosplay you might want to try it.
Add a little gloss to your lips too ^_^
But other than those small details, I have to say it's very very impressive. You look fantastic!
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This isn't the person who cosplayed, it's the photographer. Critques on the photo itself is what he's requesting.
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*looks at again* oh jeeze duh ^_^* apparently I'm bloody blind. haha
>,> blast now I wish I could delete my comment *sigh*
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Wow, just beautiful
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I love her expression in this. Great photography.
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In my opinion you follow the first rule of cosplay, pick a character you look like. I this photo was done very well. This comes from a person who a general rule doesn't like cosplay, but this is good.
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This is a beautiful shot, and I love the dreamy atmosphere. Her gaze is also quite fitting.
My only complaint would have to be that random branch, it sort of distracts from the overall image, I think it would have looked better without it.
Nice work
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I agree about the branch. I should have maimed that darn tree and removed it! hahah
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Oh my lord, she is gorgeous!!
And I love this shot, too. The focus creates some really nice emphasis on her eyes.
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Haha, I was actually just thinking about this shoot earlier today! Great minds, my friend, great minds~!
And I absolutely love this shot! Alex is so gorgeous, and you did an amazing job of capturing that! Definitely one of my favorite portraits you've ever taken, David!
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The focus is perfect! Her face is nice and clear (and those eyes!) and everything else recedes to the background.
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very very very good! the best serah ive ever seen!!
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PINK (T.T) is my fav \ (*.*) /
nice costume you have
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She is SOOOOO GOSH DARN PREETTTYY!!
And YEAHAHAHAHAHHA For pics!!! I got so excited this was in my inbox!!
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