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thesweatersong — Have I...?
Published: 2007-05-10 18:02:29 +0000 UTC; Views: 55; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 0
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Description Have I...

Humiliated you?
Shamed you too?
Knocked you down?
Thrown you around?
Made you feel worse?
Kicked you where it hurts?
Called you out?
Left you with doubt?
Broken your heart?
Torn you apart?
Killed your dreams?
Unveiled your schemes?
Slashed your hopes with a knife?
Ruined the rest of your life?
Treated you unjust?
Violated your trust?
Defamed your name?
Won your game?

Good.
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Comments: 3

hopeless-reflection [2009-02-24 03:20:47 +0000 UTC]

wow this was really impressive! I really liked it.
I liked the punch at the end.
Keep it up even though i know this is an older poem

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forleafclovgrl [2007-05-12 04:06:54 +0000 UTC]

Very impressive!! You are a great writer! Could you please check out at least one of my poems and comment? I would love your feedback!…

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bownsingKottyncloudc [2007-05-11 00:41:36 +0000 UTC]

really good job. the listing gives a pulling affect to the reader. the end is also really nice, like a smack in the face.

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