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TheToonz — The Laughing Train Express Part 7 Stealthy Escape

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Published: 2018-09-14 14:00:03 +0000 UTC; Views: 688; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 8
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Description Phew... and here it is, the final part of the Arc. I hope you guys liked this because I went with something different. Instead of doing the kick ass, take names, and all of that stuff I do. I decided to go sneaky, quietly, stealth, stuff like that and I think I did a pretty good job on it and I think it's my first time writing something like that. Also, just to let everyone know, Min-Jung is the FINAL member of the K-Squad. There won't be anymore, I promise and honestly... I don't think I can do more anyway O_o; I'm a lunatic for using all of these characters, but if I didn't, I don't think the series wouldn't as good, lol.

I had a lot of fun writing this Arc cause I was able to get that "itch" off my back and please both readers and tickling fans at the same time... kinda . Also, now that I think about it... This is probably the longest story in series 2 write now. It surpassed the "Hypnotic Suggestions" Arc by one part and I checked it out and series 2 is longer than series 1, which I was going for. 

Fun fact: I'm 90% finished with the series 2. I've been working on it for years and I'm glad I didn't give up, hobby, or not. 

I'm going to take a break for a week or two before planning the next arc and the final stuff coming up soon. I know two good friends of mines *coughKakicoughCloud* are really excited to have their characters in my next coming chapters, so I'm super excited to write that, but I want to rest first . Parts 5-7 took a lot out of me, but I did it for you guys because I love my readers aka 3 or 4 of them, lol and I'm an idiot, haha!

 
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Comments: 8

sunshineandlolipops [2018-09-18 15:52:25 +0000 UTC]

Kayleigh tempting the K-squad with treats, while letting slip that she wants to tickle torture them was my favorite moment.


It was also cool to see Krystal's caring and compassionate side. She cares for her underlings.

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TheToonz In reply to sunshineandlolipops [2018-09-26 14:37:20 +0000 UTC]

(So sorry for the late response )

Yeah, that was probably the funniest thing I wrote in that chapter.

Krystal does care for her Cadets. They're not also her Soldiers, but her friends as well. She shows a lot to them even when in a bad mood. Krystal cares for a lot of people, evil or not.

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sunshineandlolipops In reply to TheToonz [2018-10-10 17:03:21 +0000 UTC]

No worries, I was a bit busy and didn't visit DA for a few weeks anyway.


Krystal does indeed have a soft spot for the ones that are close to her. And evil and good is a matter of perspective anyhow.  

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Cloud5001 [2018-09-14 14:21:35 +0000 UTC]

hehe so no causalties this time awesome. By next week I should have the backstory out involving Anthony and Amber.

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TheToonz In reply to Cloud5001 [2018-09-14 14:37:24 +0000 UTC]

Nope, not this time.

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Cloud5001 In reply to TheToonz [2018-09-14 14:56:44 +0000 UTC]

hehe so your cool with what happened in Part 2 of Crossing Paths, with the video and everything. 

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TheToonz In reply to Cloud5001 [2018-09-14 15:04:51 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, I am.


I'm kind of having a brainfart. What happened with the video again? Sorry, my brains been all over the place this week

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Cloud5001 In reply to TheToonz [2018-09-14 15:18:00 +0000 UTC]

Hehe well to refresh Anthony currently has a recorded video of the Diamonds and what they were doing to the twins in the story, basically it's evidence that he can use to show adults like his mom what they've been doing. I explained in the story why he didn't do it this time, and have one more planned so it doesn't mess up your continuity. 

He gave a copy of the video to Corey, Ben, and Amber just in case the Diamonds get him so they won't lose it. That plot point you can use however you want to just as long as your ok with it. I'm just setting up cards that you can use basically.

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