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Thettamore — The Taint
Published: 2008-04-24 19:58:13 +0000 UTC; Views: 112; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 1
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Description The Taint

Kill them, fight back.
Your heart is filled with black.
Your sword, your one haven,
Carries as much death as the raven.

Jump up, retreat.
Turn your back to the heat.
The fire, the tinge of dark,
You can’t run away; you bear the mark.

Forget, disregard the pain.
You can’t escape the sorrow of the slain.
You run, you wander,
But there is nothing to stop the ponder.

Repair, revise.
Your wounds are bleeding, this is your demise.  
But now, I must leave, and apprehend;
Goodbye friend, this is the end.
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Comments: 7

Dawnlilly81 [2008-10-23 18:49:26 +0000 UTC]

wow, i was looking through ur E.A. gallery and i remember his poem. still awesome!

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Thettamore In reply to Dawnlilly81 [2008-10-23 22:27:34 +0000 UTC]

Hey, thanks Lilly!

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Dawnlilly81 In reply to Thettamore [2008-10-24 19:19:58 +0000 UTC]

ur welcome! anytime buddy!

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Thettamore In reply to Dawnlilly81 [2008-10-25 01:24:36 +0000 UTC]

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Dawnlilly81 In reply to Thettamore [2008-10-26 22:53:21 +0000 UTC]

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Heartbreaker77 [2008-04-24 22:28:55 +0000 UTC]

care if i add some critique to ur poem? its pretty good i must admit, but itt feels lik in some stanzas that u culd add one more line or a few more words.

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Thettamore In reply to Heartbreaker77 [2008-04-24 22:55:07 +0000 UTC]

Alright. Thanks a bunch!!! I really like it too.

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