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TheUltimateLoli — Postal Dude -Incomplete-

Published: 2007-03-29 01:02:26 +0000 UTC; Views: 324; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 0
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Description Fanart of the Postal Dude from the Postal series of games. I need some comments on how to do this better, so please crit, and I already know the following:

The Right hand is pretty much non-existent
Gasoline Canister sucks. Hard.
Right arm is messed up.
TONS OF ERASE MARKS
Terrible Lined paper.

Remember, I'm new at the whole drawing-for-an-audience thing, so crit me, but don't flame or be a dick. Also, WOO for my first PENCIL AND PAPER DRAWING on dA!

Postal and Postal Dude © RWS ([link] )
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Comments: 3

Escafa [2007-03-29 04:32:21 +0000 UTC]

You draw better guys faces then me.

Hands: start with a square for the palm and then thin blocks for fingers and a riangle for the thumb.

Canisters not so bad I would mearly make it a bit more rotund to give it some oomf.

Arm is actually pretty close. If you cut a bit of the sagging and erased some of the inner line I think it could work.

To improve on erasing just sketch lighter and hen draw in darker. I use a plain old light blue coloered pencil for my sketching and then finish with a pencil. It works great and the pencils are very cheap.

For paper I suggest copy paper. You can get about 500 pages for under 20 bucks and it lasts a long long time. I use that and a clipboard. It's a little more ghetto than a sketchbook but it gets the job done.

The bottom half should be longer and don't rush past details. Shoes are a good example. Take the time to detail them, put dsigns on them, shoelaces, anything. The more little things you throw into a picture the bette it becomes.

I hope that helps if not I'll be at AB, not in Artist Alley, but if you want some quick drawing demos there I can accomodate.

Keep it up man. You have potential.

\m/ \m/

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TheUltimateLoli In reply to Escafa [2007-03-29 11:20:39 +0000 UTC]

Cool, thanks

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animedeathgoddess [2007-03-29 01:08:53 +0000 UTC]

SEBASTIAN YOU SUCK, GET OFF DA!!!!

Haha I was a dick just cuz you said not to be.

But no really, I think it'll be cute, with just a wee bit of anatomy practice. Go buy one of those moveable mankins, that's what I did :]

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