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thevostrikova In reply to kassousminou [2012-12-17 23:11:13 +0000 UTC]
Thanks so much Kass! I love what you had to say and I do understand where I messed up on the composition.
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thevostrikova In reply to kassousminou [2012-12-17 23:31:09 +0000 UTC]
ps remember to comment on the journal to get the count added up for number of re-entries
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Orstrix [2012-12-17 22:42:41 +0000 UTC]
I really like this piece! The colouring and line on this are really good however I did pick up on something. The perspective seems a little off. the horse and the wall seem ok however, the angle that the jump is drawn is different to the horse and wall. It makes it seem like the horse has either taken off or is about to land in the wall. Other than that, keep up the good work!
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thevostrikova In reply to Orstrix [2012-12-17 22:48:21 +0000 UTC]
It was sort of meant to be that the jump was on and angle facing towards the center of the arena and I had a bit of a tough time portraying the distance between the jump and the wall but I did try and so it was sort of meant to be that the Russian and Demi were coming off of a turn over the jump heading towards the center of the arena. But thank you so much for the comment!
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thevostrikova In reply to Orstrix [2012-12-17 23:11:56 +0000 UTC]
It happens to all of us but thank you so much for the comments!
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