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thewhtnight — Leaving
Published: 2004-12-14 10:42:32 +0000 UTC; Views: 391; Favourites: 9; Downloads: 11
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Description Tonight's the night
  Tears well up, and throats choke.
  The time is here, and it is time for change.

  The memories abound and the smiles, though half-hearted, are genuine.
  A mix of emotions a varied as a box of crayons.
  But time has won its game, and so I must concede.

  I bid you farewell
  with all the blessings of my heart.
  Here's to the good
  and here's to the bad.
  Because it will forever follow us into the unknown future.

  Goodbye my friends.
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Comments: 7

Squirrel990 [2008-06-08 02:04:22 +0000 UTC]

That was absolutley great!! The box of crayons thing was great and it seems to be so true. I showed this to my friend who is moving to Indiana and we both thought it was great!

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Yuki65 [2007-05-15 20:16:17 +0000 UTC]

wow i hate it when people leave or when i would have to leave it really hurts my friend that's realllly close to me is moving and i care about him so much and i really wish he didnt have to move...it really sucks

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what-the [2004-12-16 00:54:11 +0000 UTC]

such a nice piece dj. really heartfelt and full of emotion. as mish said, the box of crayons has such great imagery. great use of words. you may just want to fix that spelling mistake, 'gorever' should be 'forever'.

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thewhtnight In reply to what-the [2004-12-18 02:13:54 +0000 UTC]

I didn't see that, thank you. Thank you for the comments too.

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Bundlebee [2004-12-14 14:42:00 +0000 UTC]

Awh man, thats really sad.

I like the box of crayon imagry, sunning poem tough subject

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thewhtnight In reply to Bundlebee [2004-12-14 20:45:27 +0000 UTC]

thx sweetie

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Bundlebee In reply to thewhtnight [2004-12-14 21:05:39 +0000 UTC]

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