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Published: 2017-06-26 02:00:49 +0000 UTC; Views: 553; Favourites: 64; Downloads: 2
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Girl from last postThis one was a tough one for me, there are a bunch of things I feel like I should fix. Like the face, and I feel it looks a bit flat. Anyways, constructive criticism would be appreciated!
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I like so much this new paintings!Keep working!
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Very beautiful and atmospheric~
For criticism, I'd say that there's no deep sense of distance, I feel as though maybe
where the horizon stops there should be more "atmosphere" like you've done with the
land in the distance. Other than that, I feel like maybe the sand doesn't have as much
colour as it should. But you've still done a great job on this painting!
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That was the main thing I was having trouble with, the whole thing feels flat. And I was having trouble adding more color to the sand.
And Thanks!
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whoa, this looks really nice!!
i think you could have added more highlights to the hair. the horizon also looks a little odd- it's flat and then suddenly jumps into curves. but this is amazing anyways, great job!
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hmm I was having a lot of issues with the horizion, I will make sure to work on that!
And Thanks!
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Hmmm I think trying to fix a bit the clothing???
Most clothes have small folding lines, these are tight or loose depending on the person's body type or clothing style.
You did a great job with the shorts, but I don't see those details with the t-shirt
Over all, you did a great job! I love the background, and the warm pastel colors on the sky
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Thanks!
And the clothing was a bit of a struggle for me. It supposed to me a tight shirt, but I don't think that really came across. idk I need to work on clothes
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