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thewritingthimble — Prejudice and Pride.

Published: 2012-04-27 15:30:32 +0000 UTC; Views: 1803; Favourites: 113; Downloads: 13
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Description So I reckon my editing has improved drastically lately so much so that I can say that I'm actually proud of the editing that I have done hehe ^^

So here we go, another haiku 5,7,5 structured poem
with an edited image

I hope you like

PLEASE DON'T COPY OR REDISTRIBUTE MY WORK WITHOUT PERMISSION THOUGH

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Comments: 36

PumpkinQueen-3090 [2012-07-22 18:43:01 +0000 UTC]

My god , she's beautiful. She realy looks like Emilie Autumn in my point of view.

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thewritingthimble In reply to PumpkinQueen-3090 [2012-08-24 18:57:52 +0000 UTC]

hehe thanks ^___^

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PumpkinQueen-3090 In reply to thewritingthimble [2012-09-01 12:37:09 +0000 UTC]

welcome

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dude-im-alive [2012-06-26 12:02:44 +0000 UTC]

was about to scroll down to read the poem then counted the syllables in that bottom right bit and was like - aaah a haiku! It's very nice, I like it (:

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thewritingthimble In reply to dude-im-alive [2012-06-26 12:31:36 +0000 UTC]

hehe thank you!!

I'm happy that you like it

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dude-im-alive In reply to thewritingthimble [2012-06-26 19:43:14 +0000 UTC]

So am I

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xxHarmoniousChaosxx [2012-05-27 22:06:56 +0000 UTC]

Love this...

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thewritingthimble In reply to xxHarmoniousChaosxx [2012-05-27 23:29:38 +0000 UTC]

I'm glad that you like it

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SilverVulpine [2012-05-10 02:57:08 +0000 UTC]

Gorgeous work!

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thewritingthimble In reply to SilverVulpine [2012-05-10 15:44:11 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much

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SilverVulpine In reply to thewritingthimble [2012-05-11 03:17:37 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome.

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ArtistofFewTalents [2012-05-09 01:00:02 +0000 UTC]

The red hair stands out and I like the font. My favorite part of the haiku is the "Utter vanity". It sounds really nice.

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thewritingthimble In reply to ArtistofFewTalents [2012-05-09 16:26:07 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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Lummutis [2012-05-08 23:51:21 +0000 UTC]

O.o

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thewritingthimble In reply to Lummutis [2012-05-09 16:27:43 +0000 UTC]

*arches eyebrow

put your eyes back into your skull boyo ;D


....after that, go make me a sandwich hehe ^_^

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C-Allagash [2012-05-05 12:44:05 +0000 UTC]

I've been learning how to like haikus. Yours contributes to that. As the previous comments says, the words fit the image perfectly.

Really nice!

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thewritingthimble In reply to C-Allagash [2012-05-05 19:07:22 +0000 UTC]

hank you very much I'm happy that it's contributed to the improval of your opinion of the form of poetry

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EclecticQuill [2012-05-04 23:35:51 +0000 UTC]

This is good. I don't usually like poetry that relies to heavily on an actual image, but this I like. The words just fit the image so well. Congrats on a good piece of work.

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thewritingthimble In reply to EclecticQuill [2012-05-04 23:52:11 +0000 UTC]

Thank you I'm happy that you like it! ^_^

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EclecticQuill In reply to thewritingthimble [2012-05-05 00:18:52 +0000 UTC]

No worries

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TsukikoCyberGoth [2012-05-02 23:04:58 +0000 UTC]

pure beauty.

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thewritingthimble In reply to TsukikoCyberGoth [2012-05-02 23:07:02 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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AstridPurins [2012-04-30 08:10:58 +0000 UTC]

I love it. I just... wow! (: x

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thewritingthimble In reply to AstridPurins [2012-05-02 23:07:14 +0000 UTC]

hehe ^_^ yay! x

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foto-ragazza14 [2012-04-29 17:53:32 +0000 UTC]

Wonderful job!!

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thewritingthimble In reply to foto-ragazza14 [2012-05-02 23:07:26 +0000 UTC]

thanks

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AbbyCatWolff [2012-04-29 14:52:17 +0000 UTC]

Ah! This is wonderful! I love your poems!

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thewritingthimble In reply to AbbyCatWolff [2012-05-02 23:07:37 +0000 UTC]

hehe thanks!

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Zmb216 [2012-04-28 23:31:49 +0000 UTC]

Love the haiku, and the background image is perfect. Such a beautiful woman for a beautiful poem.

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thewritingthimble In reply to Zmb216 [2012-05-02 23:07:59 +0000 UTC]

Aw thanks I'm glad you approve of it ^_^

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Dxt85 [2012-04-28 13:31:57 +0000 UTC]

Great work! Gorgeous

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thewritingthimble In reply to Dxt85 [2012-05-02 23:08:07 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

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Dxt85 In reply to thewritingthimble [2012-05-05 15:36:04 +0000 UTC]

Welcome!

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thisisliss [2012-04-27 23:59:09 +0000 UTC]

Gorgeous.

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thewritingthimble In reply to thisisliss [2012-04-28 00:02:45 +0000 UTC]

Thank you !! ^^

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thisisliss In reply to thewritingthimble [2012-04-28 00:11:24 +0000 UTC]

np

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