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Published: 2018-01-08 15:43:04 +0000 UTC; Views: 361; Favourites: 55; Downloads: 2
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Description Let's go to space!
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Feligriffin [2018-01-16 20:43:04 +0000 UTC]

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The colors and blending/textures you used are easily the strongest factors about this piece. The way it leads your eye to the top right is very pleasant from a design perspective, it all seems to guide you and converge to the focus point.

I'd advise using more vivid, dynamic poses that bring out more of the character, otherwise it's a very boring pose with an empty stare. The shading in the feathers specially is nicely rendered and has plenty of detail; however I feel like the viewer can't appreciate them as much due to the small character against the broad, distracting background.

For a note on the background itself, the only thing that felt empty to me was the fact there are so few stars - splattering some more around the plain blue areas would be best. Making the thicker stars smaller would be good to keep them balanced and uniform.

Overall, a very lovely piece that really caught my eye the moment it appeared in my notifications! Keep up the great work~

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theYTfox In reply to Feligriffin [2018-01-16 21:12:00 +0000 UTC]

Thank you for the feedback! It's really helpful! I'll be sure to keep those things in mind in future pieces

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Feligriffin In reply to theYTfox [2018-01-16 21:38:31 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome, I'm glad you find it helpful!

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PR1NCESSGUMMY [2018-01-16 23:58:15 +0000 UTC]

ITS SO REAAAAAAAAAAAALLLLLLLLLLLLL

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theYTfox In reply to PR1NCESSGUMMY [2018-01-23 21:20:21 +0000 UTC]

thank you ^^

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bugsthedragon [2018-01-08 22:08:26 +0000 UTC]

thi s    l o ok s     s o    c oo o o o o o o ooOOL
 

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theYTfox In reply to bugsthedragon [2018-01-09 20:37:50 +0000 UTC]

Thanks Dragon! ;w;

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