Comments: 15
HpyGrl567 [2016-07-20 17:39:04 +0000 UTC]
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This is so beautifully balanced, in both texture and color. The technique is unique, and gives a feeling of calmness, but also hope. The illusion of the ribbon look has a feel of serenity, which is mirrored by the figure sitting on shore.
Perhaps a little bit of whiter light could have been added to the sunlight rays, to reflect the image of the light and dark, both above and below the water.
The softness of the background/grass could possibly be outlined gently, but keep how the grass looks flowing alongside the figure.
The soft look of the water contrasts well with the grass; but could be enhanced; maybe with the same outlines as the figure sitting (but a little bit faded, so as to not take away the focus), to unify the background and the focal points more; as a suggestion.
Overall, an amazing piece. Well done.
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TheZodiacLord In reply to HpyGrl567 [2016-07-20 17:46:25 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so much for the critique! It's very helpful so thank you! ^^
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HpyGrl567 In reply to TheZodiacLord [2016-07-20 17:49:50 +0000 UTC]
You're very welcome! Keep making amazing art!
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TheZodiacLord In reply to HpyGrl567 [2016-07-20 17:53:09 +0000 UTC]
Thanks! You too! You have some nice stuff ^^
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Skystone45 [2016-07-21 00:17:22 +0000 UTC]
me gusta who the flip flap do you do this
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MoonStarHH [2016-07-20 22:48:47 +0000 UTC]
ahh so amazing dude!
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Kokieciara [2016-07-20 21:32:09 +0000 UTC]
very nice <3
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Wxrlus [2016-07-20 17:24:05 +0000 UTC]
its beautiful. If i was good at critiques i would critique you but ya know...Im not XD
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TheZodiacLord In reply to Wxrlus [2016-07-20 17:24:34 +0000 UTC]
haha well thank you anyway XD
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