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Published: 2011-10-30 17:45:26 +0000 UTC; Views: 3892; Favourites: 152; Downloads: 22
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Description There's blood on the floor,
A cold hand still leaning on the closed door,
The echo of a painful shout still overcome,
Imprinted in the empty sight,
The image of a purpose that was too soon gone.

Tangled bloody hair,
Of a person that decided no more can bear,
Tears like crystals still resting on the dead face,
The soundtrack of a film,
The scream of lost innocence,
On a black and white screen.

Suppressed words that cleaved a heart,
Broken promises and lies,
One more soul tore apart,
A person drown in useless cries,
Bloody, bruised wrist,
The result of the decision - no more can go on like this.

A peaceful grin,
Of a person that in the ocean of despair couldn't anymore swim,
Is frozen and distorted,
A blade, a stain of blood,
Life away has faded.

Like in a dream,
I see the bruised, dead face,
I hear a scream,
On the floor I see a bloody trace,
Snippets of a jumble film.

Another person broke down,
Took away by the whirling waves of the suicide dream,
Another person decided this world is maybe too grim,
Another lost soul, a wasted life,
Ended by the corrupter blade of a knife…
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Comments: 79

THFan259 In reply to ??? [2012-03-19 06:05:25 +0000 UTC]

Well, thanks

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emanuele23 [2012-03-17 20:08:27 +0000 UTC]

compliments, I think, you are a complete artist, very good artist......
very nice

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THFan259 In reply to emanuele23 [2012-03-19 06:05:14 +0000 UTC]

You just made my day Thank you very much I'm very happy when people appreciate my work

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emanuele23 In reply to THFan259 [2012-03-19 14:27:56 +0000 UTC]

it's a pleasure.....

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THFan259 In reply to emanuele23 [2012-03-19 17:21:23 +0000 UTC]

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emanuele23 In reply to THFan259 [2012-03-19 19:48:39 +0000 UTC]

mind of very good artist, and face of angel....

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THFan259 In reply to emanuele23 [2012-03-20 06:44:07 +0000 UTC]

I guess I have to thank you again . I hope you'll enjoy my every literature piece

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emanuele23 In reply to THFan259 [2012-03-20 20:43:11 +0000 UTC]

I think so

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kellz108 [2012-02-03 18:33:28 +0000 UTC]

i love the way you wrote it. rarely can i actually picture poems so good (its depressing yes but i dont know i really like it for that )

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THFan259 In reply to kellz108 [2012-02-03 18:39:23 +0000 UTC]

Aw, thank you very much

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kellz108 In reply to THFan259 [2012-02-10 22:34:12 +0000 UTC]

np

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freyraphael [2012-01-15 20:47:21 +0000 UTC]

Wow—I’m impressed!!

BTW: Thanks a lot for [link] !

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THFan259 In reply to freyraphael [2012-01-16 18:25:18 +0000 UTC]

Well, thank you

Also, you're welcome

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ninjabeancow [2012-01-15 18:20:41 +0000 UTC]

r u sure you arnt the god of awesome poems?

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THFan259 In reply to ninjabeancow [2012-01-15 18:23:01 +0000 UTC]

xD Well, thanks for that. But I don't do nothing more than writting down some thoughts ^^

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ninjabeancow In reply to THFan259 [2012-01-15 18:27:04 +0000 UTC]

god of awesome poem writting/thoughts!

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THFan259 In reply to ninjabeancow [2012-01-15 18:30:39 +0000 UTC]

I guess I have to thank you again. Each nice comment, each person that appreciate my work bring a smile on my face

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ninjabeancow In reply to THFan259 [2012-01-15 18:34:56 +0000 UTC]

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xAiedail [2012-01-07 17:11:07 +0000 UTC]

Wow, I am really speechless. Love this poem!!

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THFan259 In reply to xAiedail [2012-01-07 18:31:24 +0000 UTC]

Thanks ^^

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xAiedail In reply to THFan259 [2012-01-08 22:45:37 +0000 UTC]

My pleasure. (:

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adamforce [2011-12-30 14:52:41 +0000 UTC]

I love this poem! Has a really nice rhythm that matches the pace of the imagery!

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THFan259 In reply to adamforce [2011-12-30 15:19:25 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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GoddessWashuHakubi [2011-12-28 07:11:18 +0000 UTC]

Quite nice, but not as well written as "My Darkest Fear" I think it was called...

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THFan259 In reply to GoddessWashuHakubi [2011-12-28 08:40:00 +0000 UTC]

Yes, I think the same. This one wasn'y written with the same emotion as the other one you mentioned. "My Darkest Fear" is more personal and is really a nightmare I have often

By the way, thanks ^^

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GoddessWashuHakubi In reply to THFan259 [2011-12-28 08:49:23 +0000 UTC]

Combination Message:
"My Darkest Fear/ The Suicide Dream" - You are welcome. I enjoyed both very much.

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THFan259 In reply to GoddessWashuHakubi [2011-12-28 11:58:35 +0000 UTC]

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theheatoftheart [2011-12-21 21:25:32 +0000 UTC]

it's really emotional, love how the reading is so easy and words keep on flowing

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THFan259 In reply to theheatoftheart [2011-12-22 06:19:44 +0000 UTC]

Thanks ^^

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MemberofMadness [2011-12-01 02:36:34 +0000 UTC]

Good? You think this is just GOOD? This is incredible.... *sniffle*

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THFan259 In reply to MemberofMadness [2011-12-01 06:05:03 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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MyChemicalRodents [2011-11-23 09:27:25 +0000 UTC]

This is a truly emotional poem - reminds me of one I wrote: [link] left me with some haunting images

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THFan259 In reply to MyChemicalRodents [2011-11-24 06:01:28 +0000 UTC]

Thank you. I also like your poem

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MyChemicalRodents In reply to THFan259 [2011-11-28 15:50:58 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! ^^ my ideas are often morbid so it kinda fits

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THFan259 In reply to MyChemicalRodents [2011-11-28 18:52:18 +0000 UTC]

you're welcome ^^

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jaylond17 [2011-11-03 15:58:11 +0000 UTC]

this is awsome i love it dark creepy true gave me chills worth the month wait and i know what you mean by that iv lost my drive i dont really have anything more to write about but this may have inspired me ive started something now but im not done yet well maybe you started it haha

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THFan259 In reply to jaylond17 [2011-11-03 17:25:58 +0000 UTC]

Well, thank you I appreciate

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thedefinitionofodd [2011-11-02 09:27:35 +0000 UTC]

I love this piece! Might i suggest you submit this, and more of your work to ? The group could really do with your contributions.

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THFan259 In reply to thedefinitionofodd [2011-11-02 15:38:38 +0000 UTC]

Thanks ^^ I'll submit it to the group

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chocolatefreakout [2011-11-02 03:56:24 +0000 UTC]

love it, gives me an image and description in mind very inspiring

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THFan259 In reply to chocolatefreakout [2011-11-02 15:38:48 +0000 UTC]

thank you ^^

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chocolatefreakout In reply to THFan259 [2011-11-02 22:27:12 +0000 UTC]

no problem

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frickenrayofsunshine [2011-10-31 14:13:14 +0000 UTC]

this inspired me to write a story. thank you so much

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THFan259 In reply to frickenrayofsunshine [2011-10-31 18:24:25 +0000 UTC]

Well, I'm glad that I helped you , also, you're welcome

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Epicaracacy [2011-10-31 11:17:08 +0000 UTC]

I can't even say a controlled comment like "wonderful"

ITS JUST EPIC!!!

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THFan259 In reply to Epicaracacy [2011-10-31 18:26:02 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

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Epicaracacy In reply to THFan259 [2011-10-31 22:19:49 +0000 UTC]

your welcome

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hetaliallover101 [2011-10-31 10:46:26 +0000 UTC]

Amazing poem

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THFan259 In reply to hetaliallover101 [2011-10-31 18:26:08 +0000 UTC]

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hetaliallover101 In reply to THFan259 [2011-10-31 21:40:37 +0000 UTC]

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