Comments: 14
MUbyGaelle [2011-01-12 22:15:52 +0000 UTC]
Had a first read of this tonight and will come back again in the next 48 hours to go through it thoroughly.
First impressions, I like the Oracle character. Your wind chap lighten up the mood, which is good. The elf seems to have more subtance. Sevvio is still the same.
I have some problems with the pace of the chapter, but it is midnight, so that is why I'll come again when my mind is clear and give you my comments on chapter 2
Cheers!
Thama
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MUbyGaelle In reply to Thiefswipe [2011-01-17 20:21:01 +0000 UTC]
Feedback in waitng for e-mail address or other mean you suggest to send it to you!
Too damn long to put here.
Very extensive, so prepare yourself!
Cheers!
Thama
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Thiefswipe In reply to MUbyGaelle [2011-01-18 00:13:23 +0000 UTC]
Hmm... alright, I'll send it to you in a note.
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Militant-monkey [2010-11-17 22:58:15 +0000 UTC]
Duuude!
You're good at writing
/Envy
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