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ThisCrispyKat — The First Unicorn
Published: 2008-10-06 12:04:09 +0000 UTC; Views: 2874; Favourites: 83; Downloads: 33
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The Legend of the Four Golden Horseshoes* * * * * * * * * * * * *
Four horseshoes were made of mystical starlight
They were placed on the hooves of this special unicorn
Each shoe gave her a magical power
The first showed the future
The second had the power of blazing light
The third made another's thoughts sound clear and loud
And the fourth let it's wearer float like a cloud
Deep in Dream Valley the wind left her at dawn
And there she did stay for her horseshoes were gone...
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Despite the fact she could've just winked up and out of the side of the valley like any self respecting unicorn xD
This story is like the Care Bears Movie. Has a plot hole you could drive a truck into.
:Tender Heart: "Hey, didn't we grow up together?
:Brave Heart: "You must be mistaken, good sir! I have never before in my life seen you"
:Tender Heart: "Seriously, some kind of purple horse or something raised us. And we beat up some kid in a red jumpsuit, remember that?"
:Brave Heart: "Doesn't ring a bell. Purple horse...are you feeling ill?"
:Tender Heart: "Just...nevermind."
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Comments: 11
So great to read this i have seen the little movie about it when my sis was very little <3
I saw her and i was like... i know her but how? but now i know
Great work! <3
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I remember that episode, the one with Mimic. And I was like (Why doesn't that unicorn on the book have a cutie mark?)
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Yeah, continuity never was the Care Bear Family's strong point...
By the way, your poem threw an ArithmeticException...you have two "thirds", when you should have one "third" and one "fourth"...and I don't mean combining them into seven "twelthfs".
Got that?
In any case, it's a fair drawing, even though, as you know, I don't care for ponies much.
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Shut your noise pipe before Mr. Antlion terminates you with extreme porkchops, you technicality Nazi!
Y'know somethin'? I've had it. I'm gonna' fix your wagon!
*five minutes later*
Phrew! Well, here's your problem! One of the wheels was loose.
(Anyway it's not even my poem. Completely ripped it offa' the series. Now, if you had been reading MY poetry...well, let's just say that a pickled toenail and earwax sandwhich would have the same effect.)
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Mmmmm....German porkchops...
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Lier! That is a cake.
THOUGHT YOU COULD PULL ONE OVER ON ME, DID YOU?
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nice one Crispy and it look very lovely. I like how this picture turned out.
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