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Thomperfan β Fanfic Failures: No Such Luck Aftermath-Moving out
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Published: 2018-12-07 01:42:08 +0000 UTC; Views: 4528; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 2
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Loud House fanfic
Author: 007Jamesdean
Cringe Inducing Dialogue: 9/10
Cringe Inducing Visuals: 5/10
Lackluster Writing: 9/10
Annoyance: 10/10
Disturbing Content (Out of Place): 3/10
Unnecessary Cruelty: 10/10
Rancid Morality: 3/10
Spelling, Punctuation and Grammar Errors: 1/10
Unfortunate Implications: 9/10
Character Derailment: 9/10
Overall Ranking: 68/100
Other notes: This is one of the most weakest NSL sequels I have ever seen. And I have seen some pretty weak NSL sequels. It uses all the usual tropes and has the same cliches and the same OOC moments. And Lincoln only forgives Lori, Leni, Luna, Lucy and Lily, but not the other sisters even though they seemed really sorry too. Also it uses the Lincoln x Ronnie Anne ship, and you all know I donβt support that.
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Check mine outΒ
Nuts for LincolnIt's was going to be another day for Lincoln putting the squirrel suit one.
Lynn Sr:Son we need you in your the suit on.
Lincoln:Yes dad...*But what his gets the suit he stops for a momment.*
Lori:Well Lincoln we're waiting.
Lincoln:*Lincoln looks at his family at the momment then looks at the squirrel suit until...*:AAAUUUUGGGHHHH*Ripping the squirrel suit.*
Lynn Sr and Lori:*GASP!*
Lincoln:IT A Β SQUIRREL RUG!!!!*Laughing crazy.*
Lynn Sr:Lincoln what are you doing son!?
Lincoln:*Throws the shredded pieces in the air while laughing crazy.*
Lori:What's literally gotten into you? clean up this mess now!
Lincoln:Sure thing!*But he just have Luna's axe and Lynn Jr's bat and start swinging around with them.*YEHAHAHAHAHA!!!!
*Luna hides in her room holding Lily seeing their brother going crazy.Lincoln was going crazy! Destroying everything in the whole house like a crazy madman!*
Lynn Jr:You're making a mess!
Lincoln
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One thing I don't get about that fanfic is how Mrs. Santiago is going to pay for seven new additions to the family.
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That cartoon logic, am I right?
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Okay, look I donβt mean to be rude, but are there any Loud House fanfics you DONβT consider failures?
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Oh, plenty. I'm just focusing on the bad side of these stories for a while.
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Good to know. Hope you like Syngenesophobia, as dark and gruesome as it is.
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Oh, I do. I just can't wait for it to be finished.
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Neither can I. It really gives me relief over how the girls were never properly punished in canon. Or how they came up with that BS in the first place.
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Here's my head canon of how it went down:
After the sisters ran off, Lori and Leni went to the kitchen and the bathroom, respectively, meanwhile the other sisters were thinking about what to do, and then one of them came up with the sister fight protocol, they decided not to include Lincoln because they thought this was a girl issue and he doesn't get involved with their fights that much, they told Lori about it, who told Bobby about, they told Leni about it, and they told their parents about, which they agreed to because they thought it meant the kids would fight less.
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Still doesnβt excuse their stupid, Immature, thoughtless, cowardly actions.
Someday, the show will reveal what happened afterwards and where the load of Bulldust came from.
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Uh, no, I don't think so.
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Wait and see....
Okay, maybe youβre right.
I just have trouble getting over how frustrating it all is, because everyone sans Clyde was an absolute dunce at the time.
Pardon the expression.
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My god, people are still making No Such Luck fanfic? And with the same plot, Lincoln runs away, sister's evil, Lincoln saint! Bla bla bla !
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Beautiful!!! 
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This is my experimental fanfic you rated just so you know.
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It's a bad experiment.
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You think he doesn't know that? Rude.
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I know. It was a total disappointment but lots of people on FanFiction.Net liked it. But this was all an experiment.
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Actually, I didn't know you were anti-Ronniecoln. If you don't mind my asking, why don't you like that ship?
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Well, I'm not totally against it. I just think that the two are better as friends.
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