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thorin55 — What did I do...
Published: 2003-10-01 05:17:20 +0000 UTC; Views: 119; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 7
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Description What did I do...
What did I say...
To make your feelings change for me,
So very fucking rapidly.

What we had and what we shared,
Will never leave my mind,
The love I have for you,
Will withstand the test of time.

I hope one day you will take me back,
And make me whole again,
I couldn't image a life without you,
You were my begining and end.

I know it was not not my fault,
You said you needed time,
But how long must I wait for you,
Until you will be mine.

Words can't really say,
How much love I have for you.
I would take a bullet to the head,
to make sure you lived through.

I know your trouble too,
But you play it off so well,
I wonder if our love was real,
Only time will tell.

In the end I hope it all works out,
Even though you seem quite dismisful,
You will always be my one true love,
As the thought of suicide is painfuly blissful.

I love you Abby!
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Comments: 4

deleahrium [2003-12-02 23:00:45 +0000 UTC]

this is so sad... and unfortunately too familiar. i could have written these very words myself.

but it's very good, simple yet emotive. nice job.

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thorin55 In reply to deleahrium [2003-12-02 23:26:09 +0000 UTC]

thnks yeah it really is sad send me straight into depression, we will see what happens though between us, only the future can say. thnks again for the comment.

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Rabb17-106 [2003-10-01 05:19:38 +0000 UTC]

powerful... excellent style

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thorin55 In reply to Rabb17-106 [2003-10-01 05:20:24 +0000 UTC]

thnks it came all from the heart.

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