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Published: 2004-04-02 01:30:56 +0000 UTC; Views: 230; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 11
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Description time draws closer
nearer
always moving forward
what will happen between us
will you look at me and be disappointed
am i not everything you have ever wanted
am i not good enough for you
am i just another nobody
how i feel about you can not be explained that easily
i have dug deep within myself to look for the answer
i will only ever do my best for you
our eyes meet each other
the moment of truth
as you glance me over all i can worry about is your thoughts
i know mine
they are true
i long for your touch
your innerself
you stripped down to nothing
i want to see who you really are
i want the person on the inside just as much
as the person on the outside
i believe none of this to be fake or false
and if it is
tell me
tell me honestly your thoughts
your hopes
your dreams
leave nothing hidden as we both sit together
in awe of each others presense
wondering were each other has been our whole lives
wondering if all the shit we have been through was for this
was a test
a test to see if we would survive this far
to meet at this moment
we have
do you have the power within you to always be you
no matter who looks at you through a magnifying glass
and questions your life
your thoguhts
your intentions
others thoughts do not matter
only yours
but who am i to you
someone
no one
nothing
any beam of light from behind your beautiful head would feel good
on my unlit face
and it has
my world is alive
new
fresh
amazing
and all i can see is you standing there beside me
smiling
would it be wrong to assume your feelings
yes
i want to hear you say what you have to say
what you want to say
what you feel
no one has ever gotten to me like this before
this honesty
it turns my stomach up in knots
i feel like a little kid again
like i can do anything
like my dreams will come true
and with butterflys swirling inside me i will look at you
and i will ask you that one question that matters the most to me
the one that i hope you want to ask me
but for now we count down the days
and oh how i wish
i wish it was tommorow
nothing i could say about you
could possibly grasp
or come close to how i truly feel
i wonder if you will even noticed my heart laying there on the floor
in pieces
scattered
unmendable
fragile
i would give those sweet brown eyes a chance
you won't hurt me will you
i look deep within you as best i can
i see nothing but purity
honesty
truth
love
passion
unmeasurable beauty
you make me smile
as every thought of you enters my head
every word you speak
you are my beautiful angel
tears of joy fill my eyes
and i sit and wait for tommorow to come...
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Comments: 7

ducttapefanatic [2004-04-23 17:01:46 +0000 UTC]

This is really Beautiful..
I read it and the line that really stuck out to me was :do you have the power within you to always be you
I don't know why exactly.. but it just did..
You did a great job.


-Joey

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thorin55 In reply to ducttapefanatic [2004-04-23 17:32:57 +0000 UTC]

thank you

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drawerx [2004-04-07 16:50:22 +0000 UTC]

Thats pretty cool!

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thorin55 In reply to drawerx [2004-04-07 18:57:03 +0000 UTC]

thank you very much.

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wolfmaid [2004-04-03 00:38:17 +0000 UTC]

for you

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thorin55 [2004-04-02 02:57:43 +0000 UTC]

sank you, awe you write poems so much better than me. i appreciate everything you do for me. *blushes*

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iris-emotions [2004-04-02 02:43:01 +0000 UTC]

aww... *tear* that is just soo... pretty. I really like the way you write your poems, kinda broken up. you're just too cute.

a couple or six things
"a test to see if we would survied this far" survied should be survive, I think.

"you won't hurt me would you" you won't hurt me will you?

"as ever thought of you enters my head" ever should be every, yes?

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