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ThornedRose — All that you are

Published: 2004-10-04 14:10:01 +0000 UTC; Views: 105; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 6
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Description She must've been an angel
Sitting on a star
Smiling down on me
If only not so far

Cruelty gave her that smile
So she could show it to me
She'd curl the edges of her lips
Till they were all I could see

So she must've been an angel
Sitting on her star
Looking down on me
If only not so far

Too perfect were her eyes
With which she looked for mine
I'd tear down all the window blinds
Just to see them shine

Yes she must've been an angel
Coming from a star
Reaching out for me
Maybe not too far

Soft to touch and full of grace
Her hand she she placed in mine
Slowly pulling me in closer
Sending shivers down my spine

I wish you weren't an angel
sitting on your star
even though you're not real
I love all that you are
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Comments: 8

angelfocusbroken [2004-10-04 22:13:06 +0000 UTC]

Whoa, now that was what you call a tear-jerker! Awesome rhyming and you stayed on one topic, her. That was amazing! I hope to see more of your works!

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ThornedRose In reply to angelfocusbroken [2004-10-07 06:50:03 +0000 UTC]

Thank you ^_^ and if I have anything to say about it, you will see more of my work ^_^

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angelfocusbroken In reply to ThornedRose [2004-10-07 17:03:23 +0000 UTC]

I can't wait

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Keizie [2004-10-04 15:41:10 +0000 UTC]

Beautifull!!!!!! Who was that angel?

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ThornedRose In reply to Keizie [2004-10-04 19:42:32 +0000 UTC]

Oh! you don't know her. So there's really no point in telling you her name she IS wonderful though, so far she has come closest to being the love of my life ^_^

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Keizie In reply to ThornedRose [2004-10-05 14:17:02 +0000 UTC]

She loves you to ??

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ThornedRose In reply to Keizie [2004-10-07 06:49:02 +0000 UTC]

I thank god every day for that

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Keizie In reply to ThornedRose [2004-10-07 18:04:59 +0000 UTC]

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