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ThornedRose — Confess
Published: 2005-01-13 13:11:14 +0000 UTC; Views: 145; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 6
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Bless me father, for I have sinned
A thief I am now, a thief I've been
For I have stolen what belongs to another
and I have made those with innocence suffer

My crime, however
was not one of greed
for that which I've stolen
I felt a great need

I required the item
to continue to live
it could not be taken
but hers only to give

the gift, however
was already gone
when promised to another
I felt it was wrong

So bless me father, for I have sinned
a thief I am now, a thief I've been
For I have torn happiness apart
The cause for this: to steal milady's heart.
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Comments: 14

nenriki-taishite-asu [2005-02-19 01:28:10 +0000 UTC]

I absolutely love it.

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Lady-Rose [2005-01-14 01:24:32 +0000 UTC]

That was great...love the way u made it into a confession...the way it flowed was great!

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ThornedRose In reply to Lady-Rose [2005-01-17 08:18:44 +0000 UTC]

thank you oh so very much ^_^

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Lady-Rose In reply to ThornedRose [2005-01-28 14:35:27 +0000 UTC]

Your always welcome...

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ThornedRose In reply to Lady-Rose [2005-01-28 20:24:00 +0000 UTC]

I'm so glad to be in your watch list

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Lady-Rose In reply to ThornedRose [2005-01-30 23:46:14 +0000 UTC]

your welcome I'm glad to watch your work witch has blown me away... and I also want to thank u

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OBSailorStar [2005-01-13 19:56:15 +0000 UTC]

I'm always trying to figure out if you're writing from experience or just writing. Sometimes I can see hints at perhaps you writing about your own life, but you seem to also write things that aren't. ^^ I read too much into these things, I think...

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ThornedRose In reply to OBSailorStar [2005-01-13 20:47:44 +0000 UTC]

heh, maybe... but you know, the stuff I write about doesn't just fall from the sky I admit though, that I've lived at least half of those things in my imagination alone, and that the other half often falls victim to attacks of exaggeration(sp?)

but yeah, its all in there

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fullofwishes [2005-01-13 18:07:00 +0000 UTC]

Nightwish love-epic-kind of style. Lyrics-like.

I love this a specially the second chorus - well, I like to call it chorus - with the nice end revealing what the whole song - same thing here - (If not a song.. ok a poem) was about.

It's like this: hearing the song one time will make you think and hearing the song for the second time will clear up your mind.
Imho a very strong song. Poem. Of course.

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ThornedRose In reply to fullofwishes [2005-01-13 20:36:33 +0000 UTC]

heh, well it was written to be "just a poem", but if you read it as a song, a nightwish love-epic-kind of song, then I feel more flattered and motivated to write more like this than I've been in a long time thank you Anne

oh btw, I edited a bit in there (one more verse) like it better this way? or the way it was?

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fullofwishes In reply to ThornedRose [2005-01-16 10:14:20 +0000 UTC]

I only remember reading this poem. What did you change in there?

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ThornedRose In reply to fullofwishes [2005-01-17 08:17:41 +0000 UTC]

I split the second verse in two see?

by the way, thanks for the

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fullofwishes In reply to ThornedRose [2005-01-17 17:20:19 +0000 UTC]

Ow yeah now I see! You're very welcome, I just loved it. Simply.

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ThornedRose In reply to fullofwishes [2005-01-17 19:10:04 +0000 UTC]

thank you ^^^again

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