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ThornedRose — With Eyes So Bright
Published: 2005-08-26 20:48:28 +0000 UTC; Views: 146; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 3
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Description Last night I met an angel
With eyes to bright and blue
and when her eyes met my own
I'd imagine she were you

And then I felt like dying
As she was forced to leave
And no amount of trying
Could remind me just to breathe

And then I felt like dying
As she walked out the door
And I would not stop trying;
I knew I wanted more

Last night I met an angel
With eyes so bright and blue
When her eyes met my own
I'd remember it was you
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Comments: 17

fallen35butterfly [2005-08-29 05:30:08 +0000 UTC]

Very Good! I like it!

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ThornedRose In reply to fallen35butterfly [2005-09-03 19:57:48 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much!

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Keizie [2005-08-28 15:34:33 +0000 UTC]

Nice one. Is this about You Know Who ?

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ThornedRose In reply to Keizie [2005-08-28 17:10:36 +0000 UTC]

I never write poems about specific people ^^

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Keizie In reply to ThornedRose [2005-08-28 18:07:24 +0000 UTC]

They ALWAYS say that

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ThornedRose In reply to Keizie [2005-08-28 18:15:02 +0000 UTC]

its true!

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Keizie In reply to ThornedRose [2005-08-28 18:21:05 +0000 UTC]

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ThornedRose In reply to Keizie [2005-08-28 18:22:53 +0000 UTC]

I wouldn't dedicate anything as crappy as this to her =_=

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LatiepNolingus [2005-08-26 23:03:22 +0000 UTC]

wonderful work here. i like it a lot and i hope youll reconsider scrapping it. keep up the good work

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ThornedRose In reply to LatiepNolingus [2005-08-28 10:06:23 +0000 UTC]

I'm definately considering keeping it in my gallery now ^^ thanks for the comment.

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KendoSquirreleh [2005-08-26 21:46:18 +0000 UTC]

Wow, I like it! Very pretty piece; definitely undeserving of being a scrap.

Good work.

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ThornedRose In reply to KendoSquirreleh [2005-08-26 21:49:13 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! and I'll consider it

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JackLeaf [2005-08-26 21:08:40 +0000 UTC]

Don't scrap it! Don't!

This is just, awesome.

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ThornedRose In reply to JackLeaf [2005-08-26 21:23:53 +0000 UTC]

Wow O_o thanks! I seriously didn't have any faith in this piece. (in fact, I haven't had much faith at all lately)

Thanks for the fav! ^^

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Illistrauthor [2005-08-26 20:49:53 +0000 UTC]

I loved this line, "And no amount of trying
Could remind me just to breathe" great job, I saw it on the front page


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ThornedRose In reply to Illistrauthor [2005-08-26 20:53:03 +0000 UTC]

Heh, thanks myeah, oneliners are easy though.

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Illistrauthor [2005-08-26 20:49:40 +0000 UTC]

I loved this line, "And no amount of trying
Could remind me just to breathe" great job, I saw it on the front page


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