Comments: 25
Clairesimpson87 [2007-09-22 18:53:20 +0000 UTC]
wow that is really good! You're really talented! I love the ending- and the description is excellent! Claire xx
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callyn [2007-09-18 12:57:03 +0000 UTC]
Oh, I like the ending too. This is pretty good.
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The-Red-Envelope [2007-09-17 15:37:10 +0000 UTC]
Thqnk you very much for your participation ! It's an interesting story, focusing on why people could enjoy a secret/forbidden Love. Good luck for the contest !
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Muse21 [2007-09-17 10:39:46 +0000 UTC]
I enjoyed this. It's the kind of off handed almost-not-right love that you have a flare for.
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batousaijin [2007-09-16 18:05:03 +0000 UTC]
it's not the forbiddenness of this love story that makes me love it; it's the realness, the concreteness of it.
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Zieza [2007-09-16 01:43:43 +0000 UTC]
Sometimes it seems like forbidden love is the best love there is. Really great story, sucked me right in from the start and held me there.
lol now I wanna play cricket on the beach!
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showna [2007-09-15 21:16:19 +0000 UTC]
The ending is fabulous.
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