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thosewhostayed β€” Pain is Neverending
Published: 2003-11-16 08:44:51 +0000 UTC; Views: 93; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 18
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Description the pain inside has become to much,
the random eyes always seem to judge.
i thought nothing would be right until i meant you
you made everything better with every everlasting move.
you made me feel things i never felt before
you made me feel like i was adored
you filled my body with warmth and bliss
you made me feel like i would be missed
then you were gone,
i was left coldΒ Β inside and distressed,
i was left sad and depressed,
everything in my life seemed to crumble apart,
i saw no sight for a new start,
i grab ahold of what i can,
but everything seems to slip from my hands.
I need you now, so please don't leave,
please just stay
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Comments: 7

freebird48 [2003-12-05 00:07:22 +0000 UTC]

exellently written, you are a great writter

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freebird48 [2003-12-05 00:06:56 +0000 UTC]

exellently written, you are a great writter

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residesinflames [2003-11-20 04:42:49 +0000 UTC]

wow i really like this i think i might have to fave it .... i have been there ok im just gonna shut up and fav now ...

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thosewhostayed In reply to residesinflames [2003-11-20 21:29:51 +0000 UTC]

well thank you... i really appreciate it....

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thosewhostayed [2003-11-16 08:46:18 +0000 UTC]

I would really appreciate any opinions anyone has on how i could improve my poem......

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g00dnitemyl0ve In reply to thosewhostayed [2003-11-17 06:50:09 +0000 UTC]

Just kidding, eye love you and your poem superb!

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g00dnitemyl0ve In reply to thosewhostayed [2003-11-17 06:49:42 +0000 UTC]

I hate you...your poem is terrible!

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