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Lupus743 [2018-08-30 01:18:38 +0000 UTC]
This is such a sweet story!
Though, it is weird how a story named after The Monkey's Paw has apparently no negative repercussions for the wishes.
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thrilldude91 In reply to Lupus743 [2018-08-30 02:09:23 +0000 UTC]
That is a very good point. Honestly, I just named it the Muscle's Paw for the pun. Though the Monkey's Paw is a great story.
I mean, there's a little bit of a negative consequence or two. One, in one timeline Ibuki is really lonely. And then later, the world practically revolves around her. I don't know if that's good or bad, but it certainly is an unexpected consequence.
...I'm stretching for this, aren't I?
Thanks for the compliment Lupus743!
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jaxnation15 [2018-08-29 20:20:13 +0000 UTC]
Please write a sequel after the epiloge
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thrilldude91 In reply to jaxnation15 [2018-08-30 00:17:35 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, I'm writing the sequel. Still very little of it is done, like 1000 words, but I'm doing it.
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ElRoy1999 [2018-08-28 12:13:38 +0000 UTC]
You definitely nailed both Karin's and Ibuki's personalities and I liked the concept for the ending.
But I sure hope that Mika will be around for the epilogue!
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thrilldude91 In reply to ElRoy1999 [2018-08-28 12:16:34 +0000 UTC]
Mika will be around for the epilogue, but it does focus much more on Ibuki. Maybe I'll write a sequel or something like that with Mika as the main character, since I love Mika so much.
Thank you for the compliment! If I may ask, how did I fare on Mika's personality? Is there anything I should improve upon with her if I write Street Fighter fanfic again? Also, I feel bad saying this but for Karin, I just had to get in touch with my inner rich b****. Ibuki was much more pleasant to write.
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ElRoy1999 In reply to thrilldude91 [2018-08-28 12:28:24 +0000 UTC]
Mika was cute and bubbly and fun. With the focus on Ibuki, she kinda drifted away. But other than that, you nailed her. 7
As for Karin: Oh yes. Definitely.
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thrilldude91 In reply to ElRoy1999 [2018-08-28 12:34:45 +0000 UTC]
Thanks! Glad to hear I nailed her. This fanfic actually came to be because I was writing on a whim for a friend who loved Ibuki and loves muscle growth as well. If I were writing this for myself, Mika would be the one who becomes world famous and focused on (she is my waifu 4 laifu).
Now I really want to write a sequel to focus on Mika. I may actually start that in the next few days, can't today due to plans I have. If I do, I will let you know. Although I'm torn between if I should do that or a different franchise, though if I do a different franchise, I either want to do Super Mario with a focus on Peach or Daisy or Totally Spies.
Thinking about Karin, I feel bad but I had fun writing her. She is such a jerk, it was nice to let loose in a way and write stuff I normally would never say or do in real life.
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ElRoy1999 In reply to thrilldude91 [2018-08-28 12:46:50 +0000 UTC]
That's one of the best things about writing.
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thrilldude91 In reply to ElRoy1999 [2018-08-28 13:58:26 +0000 UTC]
Agreed. By the way, I caved and started the sequel.
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ElRoy1999 In reply to thrilldude91 [2018-08-28 16:06:43 +0000 UTC]
As the pigeons say: Aw yisss ...
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