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DarkdragonleaderShad [2016-02-20 02:43:02 +0000 UTC]
This is one of my favorite stories.
I like writing stories too.
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Pichulover20 [2013-07-27 00:36:38 +0000 UTC]
And I can imagine what they talked about over breakfast that morning.
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ThrilloftheHunt In reply to Pichulover20 [2013-07-28 11:48:51 +0000 UTC]
Hmmmmm I'm sure the conversation wouldn't have anything to do with Sonic transforming in a bat creature would it? haha
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ThrilloftheHunt In reply to Pichulover20 [2013-07-29 12:26:52 +0000 UTC]
XD did you get a chance to read the last chapter of Knight of the Moon?
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Pichulover20 In reply to ThrilloftheHunt [2013-07-31 17:01:53 +0000 UTC]
Thanks ^^ I know this is a lame excuse, but our printer isn't really working and I can't really read papers or stories well if they are on screen...
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ThrilloftheHunt In reply to Pichulover20 [2013-08-01 14:50:17 +0000 UTC]
Nah i understand completely take your time and let me know when you can!
I've got a new story in the works right now XD
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Pichulover20 In reply to ThrilloftheHunt [2013-08-04 20:17:17 +0000 UTC]
I thought it was great ^^ I love how to describe the fighting scene. Im usually not a big fan of "the power of friendship" cliche, but you portrayed it quite well ^^ And the fact that the beast was Dark Sonic was surprising to me. I wasn't expecting it. One thing I really liked was that you captured the feeling of hopelessness at the beginning very well. When you do that, the reader also feels relieved when things turn out alright.
I must say though, there were a lot of parts where it felt like you we're trying too hard to find fancy ways to describe a certain action.... There's a word for this, it starts with a "j" but I can't remember exactly what it is.
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ThrilloftheHunt In reply to Pichulover20 [2013-08-05 11:19:25 +0000 UTC]
I was a bit reluctant to lean on that piece because as you say it's a bit cliché anymore, but I figured it would work out for Sonic to have to rely on his friends in a way to help save himself. And as for having Dark Sonic turn out to be the real beast that was actually almost a last minute thing I came up with and it worked out well! I'm glad to see you liked that little twist. What did you think of the fight between Sonic and the beast? It didn't drag out or anything did it? I take a lot of pride in writing action scenes. XD
I can see what you mean. So maybe next time going simple is better than trying to dazzle right?
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Pichulover20 In reply to ThrilloftheHunt [2013-08-05 14:58:51 +0000 UTC]
I thought the fight was a good length for a final battle, and the word in was trying to find earlier is "jargon"
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Pichulover20 In reply to ThrilloftheHunt [2013-08-10 18:41:15 +0000 UTC]
Nah. I'm excited ^^ I'm taking Ethics and History. HAPPY BIRTHDAY by the way!
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ThrilloftheHunt In reply to Pichulover20 [2013-08-11 13:27:40 +0000 UTC]
Hey thank you! XD okay I know what history is haha but what is ethics?
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ThrilloftheHunt In reply to Pichulover20 [2013-08-12 11:33:20 +0000 UTC]
Oh duh haha I totally knew that. I didn't realize they had a college course on it though
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ThrilloftheHunt In reply to Pichulover20 [2013-08-13 12:09:41 +0000 UTC]
I certainly believe it haha I found out there's a writer's club at my college and I would like to join up I hope!
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Pichulover20 In reply to ThrilloftheHunt [2013-08-13 12:11:16 +0000 UTC]
I want to join an Acapella club.
Anyways I haven't slept at all last night... stupid Exe...
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ThrilloftheHunt In reply to Pichulover20 [2013-08-13 12:14:48 +0000 UTC]
Oh isn't that what the groups are in that Pitch Perfect movie? Haha yes I actually like that movie.
Huh :/ how come? If I may ask. What's an Exe?
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Pichulover20 In reply to ThrilloftheHunt [2013-08-13 12:23:11 +0000 UTC]
I enjoy singing. I enjoy the theatre too. I want to join Creede Theatre and from there go into voice acting.
...you don't want to know what it is. If you're curious, read about it on CreepyPasta.com but don't watch any videos of it unless you can handle nightmares...
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ThrilloftheHunt In reply to Pichulover20 [2013-08-13 12:27:34 +0000 UTC]
Hmmm what's Creed Theatre? And voice acting would be SO cool XD I would love to hear myself in a video game or something like that haha
It can't be that scary is it? Could I find videos of it on youtube?
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Pichulover20 In reply to ThrilloftheHunt [2013-08-13 12:32:00 +0000 UTC]
I want to work for Funimation. They dub Japanese animes into English.
Yes just search for Sonic.exe.
But I warned you...
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ThrilloftheHunt In reply to Pichulover20 [2013-08-14 11:39:15 +0000 UTC]
Oh wow that'd be fun!
I watched the video of it on youtube and read the story on creepypasta and wow it was pretty sketchy. But awesome!
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ThrilloftheHunt In reply to Pichulover20 [2013-08-17 12:56:34 +0000 UTC]
I can certainly understand that when someone takes a nice character from a fun game and twists it into something far more sinister.
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ThrilloftheHunt In reply to Pichulover20 [2013-08-18 13:52:35 +0000 UTC]
Oh yikes :/ I'm sorry to hear that. I'm kind of a scary movie fan so it didn't bother me quite as much
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Pichulover20 In reply to ThrilloftheHunt [2013-08-18 15:53:29 +0000 UTC]
Well me too. I don't mind scary movies and jump scares. But this... It's just frightening to me.
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ThrilloftheHunt In reply to Pichulover20 [2013-08-18 17:14:06 +0000 UTC]
Speaking of horror stuff, I watched that Mama movie the other night....scariest movie I've ever seen but it has a sort of a happy ending which is unusual for a horror movie
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Pichulover20 In reply to ThrilloftheHunt [2013-08-18 17:41:09 +0000 UTC]
I don't watch too many horror films. They're mostly all the same.
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ThrilloftheHunt In reply to Pichulover20 [2013-08-20 13:40:27 +0000 UTC]
Yeah you got a point there. There are a few that stand out I think. What bothers me is when a really good horror movie has something happen and it becomes stupid then. Like Insidious when they show the demon and he has goat legs.
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Pichulover20 In reply to ThrilloftheHunt [2013-08-20 15:06:04 +0000 UTC]
Yah I saw that one and I thought it was stupid. They are making an Insidious 2 and I was like REALLY???
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