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Published: 2013-08-19 06:05:48 +0000 UTC; Views: 615; Favourites: 17; Downloads: 3
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Any questions about his info commentand fyi give lilredroses.deviantart.com/ some credit
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Long or short story
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He's an Alicorn oc so I'll take the long one,plus I saw you rp with my friend Kindheart and wanted to know if you'd rp with me aswell
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He is adopted son to twilights parents (or celestia you pick) his vorth parents die of the invation of darkness. Celestia give thunderwing a dragon egg but its unknown type of dragon its a female name faith and shes a nightfurry. He also found and made the legendary sword of equestria. And he always want to make celestia proud
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I have a few questions:
Why is he an alicorn?
What's his personality?
Why did Celestia out of all ponies adopt him?
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1. Well he is born as a alicorn from another kingdom
2. He is freespirit want to help others the best he can
3. Well she teaches him twilights parents took care of him
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Okay but I really don't think that's enough reasoning why you basically made him a supreme being. The My Little Pony definition of an Alicorn is "Alicorns are pony characters in the show and other material who have both a unicorn horn and pegasus wings and, depending on the depiction, also have Earth pony power. They are styled as royalty.[3] Meghan McCarthy , the show's head writer, says that the title of "princess" is one that is earned in Equestria"
KEYWORD: earned
Born Alicorns are extremely rare as Celestia said in In The Crystalling - Part 1 , Celestia comments, "The birth of an Alicorn is something Equestria has never seen!"
Being a freespirit who helps others isn't a personality,when i asked what his personality I meant a combination of characteristics or qualities that form an individual's distinctive character. This combination could be added to thousands of characters. Any flaws at all? I get that a lot of my characters are underdeveloped as well but that's because I'm getting started and still have to organize my next gen. You however have this Ponysona as what looks to be your main oc.
Teaching someone isn't adopting someone, you can't say that Twilight's parents adopted him but then he's the son of Celestia
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Well i give him own personallity
That is gentle heart kind with animals good with kids and want to be a leader someday
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A. You didn't respond to the alicorn thing
B. A character needs flaws!
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Ok he also made few mistakes
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Dude that's literally every person who has ever lived and ever will live. A character with such detailed good deeds and then vague flaws can be (and im sorry i have to use this word) a mary sue/gary stu
try this www.springhole.net/writing/mar… and www.wikihow.com/Create-and-Dev…
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Well his backstory has a 2ed story
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The 2ed story is instead of celestia adopted thunderwing, its twilights parents who adopted him
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Okay but you still haven't responded to the points I made about him being an alicorn
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Well here comes the best part
During a battle against nightmare moon he give the mare 6 a helping hand and use the magic he had as alicorn and then he is now a unicorn
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Also if Faith came from the egg of an unknown dragon why is she referred to as a nightfury?
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I would like to have an MLP OC drawing.... But I don't want to be a bother to whoever drawn this lovely piece of artwork...!
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Do you think she could draw requests of my MLP OC? I mean, I would like to make a good first impression...
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I have greeted her.
How is your day so far?
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Same here. Besides me drawing your character, it's pretty boring...
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you know why February is not a great month for me?
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Oh, I'm sorry... Oops.
But, is there something I can do to make you feel better?
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I'm working on an idea for an MLP OC...
She looks kind of beautiful and if you'd like her or not...
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I think her name is "Autumn Goldenleaf."
(I made that name up, since I made her.)
I'll try to upload the pic of her ASAP.
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I haven't made a cutie mark, but it could be a pumpkin with red leaves surrounding it...
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The character was just for fun, but she is beautiful in my terms...
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this is MY artork. please give ME credit for it... thanks.
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I will
And it's nice to talk to you
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hold on let me make some update on it
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