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Thurosis — Kidnapped Miaka

Published: 2010-02-14 01:17:07 +0000 UTC; Views: 26536; Favourites: 164; Downloads: 181
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As i said before

i still have a lot of ideas (Stories) for Mechas Heart AI, which i'm happy and glad about, but the worse part is, that i lack of time or don't feel like to draw a whole story.

but i still like to tell them ^^

Here is a Story about Miaka who got kidnapped (maybe the next chapter of Mechas Heart AI or one of the farther ones)

It is a beautiful day, when Miaka wakes up from her artificial slumber in the labotory. She stands up and check all her internal systems. All systems are green and she couldn’t find any Ayaka-corrupted files. After the check-up she looks around, the laboratory looks messy as ever, but she see that Thurosis is still asleep in front of his giant computer. He is tierd from the hard work yesterday night, and Miaka rememberd suddenly the maintenance yesterday that took longer than expected, also that Thurosis tried hard this time, because he don't want to repeat the experience he made few months ago.
Miaka goes closer to him, touched his cheek and smiled. She suddenly turn around and goes upstais, because she want to make a delicious breakfast, to surprise Thurosis, when he wakes up but at the stairs she began to go carefully up the stairs, even if her AI is 100% sure that she won’t fell down. But the awareness that if she get any damage would hurt, her master more than herself would, maked her to be extra careful.
In the kitchen Miaka opened the fridge, her inner sensor showed her immediatly the abnormal temperature inside. It’s 17,5°C, way to warm, so she began to take a look at the food. Her AI whisper with an mechnical voice:

Initiating: Food analyzing Programm:

Object: Cheese.
Analyzing status: ...
Analyzed: Abnormal Form of 85%, furry coat, moving.
Object Status: Rotten, unenjoyable for humans

So Miaka analyzed one thing after another, and at the end she found out that nothing is edible inside the fridge. Few seconds later her AI concluded to go out to buy the ingredients she needs for the breakfast, but before Miaka could went out, at the Door, she stopped, because she noticed that she needs to dress up, because she is still naked!

Dressed like a normal human girl, she went outside, and her GPS tells her the way. The next Supermarket is just two blocks away, so it isn’t difficult.
[...]
On her way back, Miaka is really happy that nobody noticed that she is an android, but she didn’t noticed that someone followed her since she left the supermarket...
Around the street corner a man suddenly attacked her from behind, he grabbed and hold her hands and with the other hand he put a scarf at her mouth. Miaka noticed that the scarf is filled with chloroform. But since Miaka is an Android, she didn’t fall asleep as the unknown attacker as exspected, she hit his stomach with her elbow and jumped away from that guy.
Miaka turn around and saw that the attacker is masked. The masked man still holding his stomach, and Miaka saw see this as a chance to knock him out. But unluckly that guy could evade and started lightning fast a counterattack and hitted her with a Voltage pistole.
Caused by the high voltage Miaka, all system went offline... and her sight turned black.
Miaka suddenly rebootet herself, and went online again, without knowing how much time have passed but not even a second have passed she receive a large amount of fatal and critical errors... [to be continued]

sorry for my bad english
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Comments: 48

fembotholly [2015-08-08 02:15:14 +0000 UTC]

mmmm, i do love me some damaged androids

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Thurosis In reply to fembotholly [2015-08-14 08:30:26 +0000 UTC]

me too, me too

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Anthroponacious [2015-07-12 04:44:45 +0000 UTC]

Link Is Dead

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Thurosis In reply to Anthroponacious [2015-07-13 18:55:22 +0000 UTC]

sorry i couldn't find it either

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SpamHands [2015-03-25 00:04:21 +0000 UTC]

Hey Thurosis did you notice Miaka's not around and hasn't come back to the house yet?

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Thurosis In reply to SpamHands [2015-03-25 23:32:42 +0000 UTC]

i noticed it and i'm searching for her everywhere

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SpamHands In reply to Thurosis [2015-03-26 04:04:49 +0000 UTC]

Guess I'll do some investigation. Did you happen to know where she went?

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Thurosis In reply to SpamHands [2015-03-27 19:50:46 +0000 UTC]

She told me, that she is going out to the grocery store
To get the ingredients for the dinner

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SpamHands In reply to Thurosis [2015-03-27 23:42:40 +0000 UTC]

Yeah I noticed that the fridge is empty. Well, I'd better "kill two birds with one stone". *goes to nearest super market and gets usual stuff for food* Hmm.

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Thurosis In reply to SpamHands [2015-03-28 09:57:06 +0000 UTC]

i followed you but we couldn't find Miaka anywhere inside

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SpamHands In reply to Thurosis [2015-03-28 14:56:26 +0000 UTC]

Outside I then whiffed a little bit of something and then fell a sleep. (sorry if this is a bit too soon for finding that out)

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Thurosis In reply to SpamHands [2015-03-30 11:23:19 +0000 UTC]

(No Problem at all)
Me: OMG!!! what happened? Are you okay?
I slap your face to wake you up

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SpamHands In reply to Thurosis [2015-03-30 23:42:04 +0000 UTC]

euagh What the hell happened? Wait! That's it Miaka was KIDNAPPED! I hope this works...*freezes time* I should rewind time so I see what happened *rewinds to the kidnapping* Oh my... *unfreezes time and back to current time knowing were to go* (power only lets me see past not go to past) YOSHITAKA! I KNOW WHERE TO FIND MIAKA! *runs to kidnappers hideout*

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SenInt In reply to SpamHands [2015-05-26 07:30:38 +0000 UTC]

*Silently leaning from behind to look over the shoulder.*
"Dude... You have THAT kind of things? You better register them before I have to ticket you..."

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SpamHands In reply to SenInt [2015-05-26 14:35:25 +0000 UTC]

wut

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SenInt In reply to SpamHands [2015-05-26 14:43:16 +0000 UTC]

"I was strolling nearby and try some of my new applications... and one of these applications notified you having some... devices you haven't told before... it seems quite interesting... what are you doing with it? And what for?"

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SpamHands In reply to SenInt [2015-05-29 03:44:47 +0000 UTC]

( I realized this was before I had a little consistency with my gear.)

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SenInt In reply to SpamHands [2015-05-29 06:08:49 +0000 UTC]

(I see)

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Thurosis In reply to SpamHands [2015-03-31 00:18:54 +0000 UTC]

I do not actually understand you, but follows you

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SpamHands In reply to Thurosis [2015-03-31 00:30:54 +0000 UTC]

I saw where the kidnapper in my time manipulating visions and I'll explain later. *runs in with my trusted megabuster* Ok. *gives Yoshitaka a weapon* (can be anything you want) So we'll stick together and search the area for Miaka.

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Thurosis In reply to SpamHands [2015-04-02 08:02:48 +0000 UTC]

i agree. and jump in

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SpamHands In reply to Thurosis [2015-04-02 15:06:47 +0000 UTC]

This place looks straight forward. *trips on a string* Ack! *grabs you by the arm and runs to a door*  *huff* This son of gun set up traps just for kidnappings. Well I look through this door's window. *Inside there's MIAKA but all screwed up with missing limbs and panels with a bunch of wires hanging around* *opens door*STOP RIGHT THERE!

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Thurosis In reply to SpamHands [2015-04-07 00:00:59 +0000 UTC]

The room is empty nobody is there.
Only we both and Miaka are here.
Miaka is in real mess.
And i'm totally shocked by the sight.
In the next moment i started to cry and tears comes out of my eyes.
NOOOOOOOOoooooo

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SpamHands In reply to Thurosis [2015-04-07 00:03:12 +0000 UTC]

Aw poop. Well don't let your guard down because that son of a ***** can...*Got knocked out by kidnapper*

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Thurosis In reply to SpamHands [2015-04-12 20:15:05 +0000 UTC]

i start to panic.
and my vision blurrs away into darkness.

it felt like seconds have pasted. After i opnen my eyes.
i see only a sea of dried blood on the ground where the kidnapper stood "few seconds" ago.
You are not harmed and Miaka is still in her inoperate state.

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SpamHands In reply to Thurosis [2015-04-13 15:02:09 +0000 UTC]

As I open my eyes, I realized I was put in some room locked and was stripped of all of my weapons.
Me: Well what will I do know. Oh! *found the transmogrify-r* this is always handy and it's disguised as a toy gun.
I look around the room and found a bunch of weird stuff probably for kidnapping and robot arms with all of the seams in silicon and such.
Me: Those must be Miaka's arms. I've got to get out of this room. *transmogrify the door into a cracker*
Outside, i find you still on the floor and Miaka's still a mess.

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Thurosis In reply to SpamHands [2015-04-13 21:32:03 +0000 UTC]

But i started already to make an improvised repair

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SpamHands In reply to Thurosis [2015-04-13 23:11:45 +0000 UTC]

Me: Here you go. *gives Miaka's arms to you* ARGH!
The kidnapper snuck up on me and stabbed me. Then, I counter attack him.
Me: WHY ARE YOU DOING THIS?!

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Dantesparda90 [2011-09-19 19:15:44 +0000 UTC]

so sad I hope she gets a happy ending

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Thurosis In reply to Dantesparda90 [2011-09-28 11:43:26 +0000 UTC]

we will never since i stopped writing this story...

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Dantesparda90 In reply to Thurosis [2011-09-28 11:45:00 +0000 UTC]

...well that sucks

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Thurosis In reply to Dantesparda90 [2011-09-28 17:14:01 +0000 UTC]

yeah, I'm sorry for the dissappointment

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Dantesparda90 In reply to Thurosis [2011-09-28 17:32:10 +0000 UTC]

it's ok

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Etermaldream [2011-05-09 22:14:30 +0000 UTC]

awesome dude

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Thurosis In reply to Etermaldream [2011-05-10 10:44:13 +0000 UTC]

thank you very much ^^

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Dragonguardian253 [2010-06-01 08:16:03 +0000 UTC]

wow,poor miaka.she goes down to the market and ends up getting caught by someone...great beginning of the story.

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Thurosis In reply to Dragonguardian253 [2010-06-04 17:33:56 +0000 UTC]

thank you very much

and how about 2nd part? if you have read it... bad i mean the story not the situation in there...

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Dragonguardian253 In reply to Thurosis [2010-06-05 13:13:15 +0000 UTC]

i've read the second part.that dude is seriously messed up,he's extremely messed up.i hope that miaka gets free soon and that masked guy gets what he deserves!

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Elwe-the-Elf [2010-02-15 03:54:01 +0000 UTC]

Object: Cheese.

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Thurosis In reply to Elwe-the-Elf [2010-02-15 15:05:15 +0000 UTC]

yes, cheese xD ^^

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AngelinoDali [2010-02-14 02:32:38 +0000 UTC]

also ich mag die brüste super

hmm mal ne frage: die eine erscheint mir größer als die andere is das gewollt?

PS: dieser style könnte echt nen eigenen manga style ausmachen. dieses digitale und das reale mit bleistift gezeichnete hat einen eigenen reiz finde ich. ich mag die details

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Thurosis In reply to AngelinoDali [2010-02-14 10:24:37 +0000 UTC]

Ich lerne gerade speedpainting, aber ich merke dass ich doch zulangsam bin...
and dem Bild habe ich 2 std dran gearbeitet, dabei ist mir wohl auch so einige Fehler unterlauf ^^"

Aber vielen dank

werde bei den nächsten bildern mehr beherzigen ^^

Wegen dem style
Danke! (>o<) das freut mich zu hören xD ich mag bleistiftzeichnungen xD damit kann man so schön schmieren xD hehehehe

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AngelinoDali In reply to Thurosis [2010-02-14 19:09:17 +0000 UTC]

hmm ich glaube es geht nicht um geschwindigkeit -> das alle immer so gerne schnell sein wollen -> dann dauerts erst recht länger ich glaube daran is die leistungserziehung schuld

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Thurosis In reply to AngelinoDali [2010-02-14 20:31:48 +0000 UTC]

hast da wohl recht,
aber ich habe deswegen mit einem RL freund darüber geredet xD hehehe
und wir beide sind durch YouTube videos zum entschluss gekommen dass man im gegeteiligen (mit viel geduld) auch das gleiche erzielen kann ^^
Vorallem wenn man denkt dass das Bild fertig ist, dann man später noch Mal daran setzt und mehr dazu macht xD

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Xenosnake [2010-02-14 02:28:42 +0000 UTC]

Noooo Miaka!! T_T I'll save you!! ( >O_O)>

Go Ilse!! >_<

Ilse: Eh? O_O

I'm out of paper....XP Where is Yomi anyway? <_<

Ilse: ....>_>

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Thurosis In reply to Xenosnake [2010-02-14 10:25:12 +0000 UTC]

LOL xD hehehe

combined worlds interesting xD

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alberio696 [2010-02-14 01:27:49 +0000 UTC]

sweetness, love the story so far.

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Thurosis In reply to alberio696 [2010-02-14 10:25:22 +0000 UTC]

thank you xD

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