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Published: 2016-03-31 13:58:05 +0000 UTC; Views: 1865; Favourites: 46; Downloads: 7
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Say hi to Jane ^.^p.s: I did some minor changes though (ex: I removed the flower from her head because I don't think a flower can do any good in this situation ;_; ), so she can look more dark and stuff ;_; I hope you dont mind...?
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Jane's always awesome. No matter which version.
Also, I really love this design.
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Yep x3 she's my favorite no matter what
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Ooooh. None-the-less, I still like it.
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Thanks for mentioning me, but you really brought out her solidness, compares to my awful style of art ^^
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Thank you xD
(and she's beautiful too T^T *fangirl mode - ON* xD )
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Go ahead be a fangirl
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Awww, thank you ^^ She looks so badass!
(yeah..i probably should have explained the flower more. I saw the rose as a kinda symbol she wore of in memory of her parents, since every year she would leave roses by their graves. She pins the rose close to her hair to keep her parents close, if that makes sense. But I guess in combat she wouldn't wear it, I guess... ^w^)
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Thanks ^^ and I'm glad you find her badass xD I've tried different poses for her but this one is the only one that I can make a full pic with ;_; (the others just simply dont fit her personality in my opinion
You know... I think there are other ways to make a symbol instead of her pinning the rose on her hair ;_; I just think that the flower won't fit for a girl that is seeking for revenge in a world filled with monsters ;_; It's creepypasta after all
Maybe you can make her have a necklace that resembles a rose? 
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Yeah, I guess I see what you mean with the rose ^^ I just sort of see it as Jane trying to hold on to that one speck of innocence she has left, as she doesn't want to become like the killers she's after. I guess that's all. Obviously the rose does nothing, but it's like a weird ceremonial thing for her. Like she wants her parents to pay witness.
I know it seems a lot more 'girly' in a sense when comparing to the rest of her, but I guess I just see roses as kind of gothic. So she isn't meant to look pretty, but it's rather a symbol of her parents remembrance, as I associate roses with both love and also funerals.
But if you don't like the rose, that's fine
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I abselutely get what you mean, but what I mean is maybe you can make the rose in different form, not a real flower, but, for example, a necklace instead. It'll look cooler, and it'll have more meaning since it's her last gift from her parents. Besides, roses wither and die, while necklace (or whatever type of jewelry) doesn't. Roses will have less time with her ~> it doesn't leave much emotion, while an object that was given to her since the time she was a teenager can leave more emotion because it watches her changing from an innocent girl into a determined killer. It holds both her innocent and her vengeance. When she looks at it, she may be reminded of her parents as well as her life, which were all taken away by Jeff.
And it's not me that's matter, but it's you. The story is yours
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Okay, I totally understand. I guess the rose isn't great at practicality..
I guess the rose could be a fake one, or it could maybe have some kind of supernatural element to it, and would add to her dying innocence. Like, it stays alive for so long, and she questions why, as also why her face has healed to look like the mask Jeff mocked her with. Almost like so divine intervention is looking down on her and either giving her a gift, or a curse..
I guess your version is much more practical, but I guess with the rose thing is I wanted to tie it with themes of my story idea. The necklace is fine and all, but I guess a rose is more simpler, and kinda shows how obsessive she is for revenge that she picked the symbol rather than to was given to her by her parents. I guess so it shows she chose revenge, but could sort of symbolise that maybe her parents wouldn't actually want her to kill in their name, and what she is ultimately doing is pointless as they are already dead, and Jane really has nothing to prove to them.
In the end, once Jane finally makes her kill, she feels nothing was accomplished, and it wasn't the way she wanted it. She then feels empty, and the rose finally wilts and dies, along with her innocence...
(sorry for making that all sappy and weird ^////^)
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I think your idea is pretty interesting
But may I ask for a favor though? Can you not let her wear the flower on her head... T^T She can keep it in her pocket or sth T^T A flower on her head is just... It'll reduce her atractiveness and creepiness. Ppl will look at her appearance first, then they'll decide if they want to read her story or not, so before they can figure out the meaning of the flower, some of them might have already left because of the flower .......
I mean no offense, but it's just a flower pinning on a killer's hair may not be the best option for a creepypasta... ^.^"
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I guess not, but then again, the main villain of my story (which isn't Jeff, weirdly enough) Doesn't look scary in the slightest XD
You may already know of Madame Musicmouth? AKA Clarisse Delacroix?
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Which means you'll still let her pin the rose on her hair right? (I just want to make sure, because I'm afraid that my English isn't good enough for me to understand stuffs sometimes ^.^" )
Anw I've never heard of Madame Musicmouth
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(It's fine ^u^. But sorry I took so long to get back)
Here's a pic someone did of her ^^ tsnophaljakarax.deviantart.com…
I can show you her original one if you like, with her description. It might offer a little more to the story I had in mind :3
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Badass as hell!
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