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Published: 2008-01-15 03:09:55 +0000 UTC; Views: 8622; Favourites: 93; Downloads: 179
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Ep 1 complete, let's reviewThe idea came from the fact that there were a ridiculous number of some sort of creeping crawling things all over the floor of the public laundry room for my apt for weeks upon weeks to the point where my fear and hatred for them kept me from going in there. There's your episode.
Edits abound: I changed this story probably 20 times or more as I was writing it. In early versions Wrigley is behind it all. Many small anecdotes get cut due to time restraints and the fact that I need to move a story along. A last minute change here, Wrigley was supposed to be wanted for homicide, but I thought it was too serious and changed it to something lighthearted. Either way, his butt's still in jail and the "real" bad guys get off easy, but then, they weren't the ones who attacked police officers, were they?
Since I went all out as to do an opening sequence the last two panels are mock credits. Thanks for reading, and liking and fan arts and etc. Thanks to ~SatAmRevival because I wouldn't have done this comic otherwise.
And I bid you adieu
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Comments: 62
I liked it- the characters are distinct, and I like the color full feel of it.
My only problem is *I* ended up feeling sorry for the bugs, and Wrigly too. They got taken away from home, and then killed. Poor fellas.
But yeah Wrigly was a dope. I'd like to see more of him, though.
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*reads comic* Whoa. o_O That was super entertaining! 
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Bright colors, great characters, humor, and good writing? Kicks the crap out of any Saturday morning cartoon we have these days!
NEVER EVER STOP BEING AWESOME.
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Hmm, that black chick is a horse, right? Reminds me a bit of the design from Eto-ranger. Any relation?
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Nice, can't wait to see what's next.
--LBD "Nytetrayn"
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...what?! I didn't get the update?! How could I miss this?! O___o
This is a great way to end the first episode! Wonderfully done
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I enjoyed this a lot! Didn't expect to lol so much but I did. The character designs seemed odd at first but they really grow on you.
I don't really understand why Wriggly was being so sneaky at first though... maybe I missed something. or what it just because of the parking tickets? XD
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this comic could be an awesome tv show. i'd watch it
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THIS WAS GREAT! I had so much fun reading it. Like a cartoon permanently on pause. I hope you do continue them, cause they really truly do remind me of waking up Saturday mornings back in the good ol' 90's and watching toons.
The mock-credits at the end are awesome too,
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Woo, the Chief has a KITTY!
Anyway, I really enjoyed this 'Episode' of yours. Especially the ending 'Group laugh'; a necessity for any comedy series!
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Ah, tis a swell finish overall with this. If it were a purchasable comic, I know well that you'd get many purchases...
...I could have probably said something a little more creative than that...and I could have done it too, what with time to write this and a backspace button...oh well.
^_^
Thank you very much for sharing this with us all.
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Aww it's over already! Hope to see ep 2 sometime ;D
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Lol! Loved the voice thing
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And you HAVEN'T submitted this to a TV station/production yet because?
I think it would make an AWESOME cartoon. XD I'd tape it and every thing.
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BRAVO BRAVO! I'm an instant fan! I do hope to see more episodes in the future! There will be, right? ;^; I've had a fanart piece in my head for some time now I need to get on paper sometime soon. XD
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Of course Andrea Romano was acting director! She's a pretty busy lady. I was thinking the last strip was the end of this story, but this wrap-up one is great to see, especially for the credits.
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It was gorgeous! And I loved the VA panel at the end, there. Thanks for sharing all the extra info, too!
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clancy brown is an awesome pick! 
really enjoyed the pacing and the layout. love your lines and coloring! and sacha is so dang cute.
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LOL I love the credits. Mostly cause you're awesome and used Clancy Brown! ANd I can see it.
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Who is half of those people who did the voices?
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I'll comment on the series: quite interesting. Good job on the visuals and writing; both are often the good kind of quirky. In the context of SatAM Revival, it really can be seen as reminiscent of '70s and early '80s entertainment in some ways. Congratulations on finishing the first ep, Mr. Thweatt!
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I've enjoyed following this story. It's brilliantly written, the art is beautiful and the characters are creative and original. Excellent work!
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Well you at least deserve a "Bravo"!
I enjoyed reading the first episode. I like the part on this page with the "Group laugh" joke.
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I think I remember once reading Wrigley's profile and it said that he could kill a man-so I wouldn't be surprised if it was homicide-but the unpaid parking tickets idea is cute.Heh-and Wrigley was also arrested for indecent exposure!LOL! I'm secretly glad you didn't kill Wrigley. Anyhow-I love the part where poor Sacha faints because of the butterflies!
Great job on your comic series. I'd love to see this as a tv show myself. (Heh-and I recognize at least 6 of the voice actors you listed) Can't wait to see the next episode.
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OMG! xD
That ending was awesome!
I love ending the show with a group laugh!
Awesome!
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That was an amazing episode, yet alone an awesome series. I also laughed a bit seeing Sacha's name wasn't in the voice credits. It does make sense after all. XD
Can't wait to see more from you. Keep it up. :3
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Along with making this fun in it pretending to be a cartoon, the credits also weedle out the die-hard cartoon fanatics, like me, who actually recognise most of those voices. I know 7 out 10 of those names. You may now throw rocks and sticks at my geeky self.
My favorite voice actors Jeff Bennett, I'll give anything a watch if he's in it.
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Huzzah! What a great episode, I hope there will be another in the pipeline
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The credits at the end totally make me imagine how the characters oughta sound. Fantastic throughout! ^___^
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It's been too long since I was last Thweatted. More updates!
"VOICE DIRECTOR: ANDREA ROMANO"
As if anybody else could do it. Your list lacks the required-by-law appearance of Frank Welker, though. He's in everything.
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dammit you should have said the names prior so I could read it in their voices
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I've loved it since I started reading it, you art with a fun story line makes it worth it and I personally hope there's more! ^^
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This deserves to actually be a show, if for no other reason than it'd likely be the first animated program to use the word "cafetorium".
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I have to applaud you for this epsiode, it's was well done.
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Now that's a retro ending! Except for Chief ruining it.
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What does it say about me that I only needed to look up Clancy Brown and Kevin Michael Richardson, and I vaguely knew who the latter was anyway? Obviously, that I watch too many cartoons. Also, you left out Frank Welker as Sacha's buzzes! Or is he uncredited, as he so often is?
And why do I always get Tom Kane and Tom Kenny mixed up? Is the the Powerpuff Girls connection, or just the similar names?
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Cool to have some voices to go with the characters. Not all of them match what i had in my head but most are close to what I had in mind.
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