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Published: 2015-09-20 21:00:48 +0000 UTC; Views: 653; Favourites: 16; Downloads: 6
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Whoo, I finally got this one finished! Took me over 49 hours...I need to get over my semi-perfectionist tendencies  Anyway, I'm okay with how this came out!

As I did with my Letty pic, I drew up a chocolate version. Serenity on the Fields ~C~

Feedback and opinions are welcome!

Fire Emblem (c) Intelligent Systems

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Whoo! Finalmente conseguí terminarla! Me tomó más de 49 horas... Necesito dejar de lado mis tendencias semi-perfeccionistas De todos modos, estoy feliz por como se fue dando el proceso.

Así como hice con mi pic de Letty, dibujé una versión chocolate. Serenity on the Fields ~C~

Comentarios y opiniones son bienvenidas.

Fire Emblem (c) Intelligent Systems

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Comments: 7

gmsp123 [2015-10-07 03:22:35 +0000 UTC]

Okay, this is new. Nice to see some big changes from ya~ :>

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TidalEspeon In reply to gmsp123 [2015-10-07 10:07:52 +0000 UTC]

Mhm.

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Arvatzc [2015-09-30 14:37:47 +0000 UTC]

That looks very nice! and wow, it took you so much time o.o I love the detail of the butterfly, looks pretty *^* I also like the colouring and shading if the picture, although I think that it’d look better if you make the shadows deeper, like you did at the top of the dress. Anatomy looks pretty good although you still have to watch out (for example that the arm at the right is too short and the face is too small compared to the head, watch out where you place the eyes, nose...). The dress looks good, but keep in mind that fabric folds, so you shouldn’t have to draw it straight… I know some good tutorials about that if you want   The background is cool too, I like how you did the grass, and the flowers too, but they should be bigger, they're pretty (a little advice: if you combine various green tones for the grass you'll get a deeper look ) By the other hand i must say that the tree doesn’t look good, the shape looks irregular and gives the feeling as if you simply painted it in 2 minutes… I know, trees are hard to draw (I also know a tutorial about that if you wanna) although the leaves look pretty good (for the leaves can be applied the same i said for the grass) The sky is cool too, I like the clouds you did, like very soft, although i think they'll look better a bit bigger. If in a future drawing, if you want them to be more noticeable you should try to shadow them with a bit of light grey

Omg, sorry if that was long… I really hope I helped, keep up the good work!  

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TidalEspeon In reply to Arvatzc [2015-09-30 18:02:07 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for the feedback : > Yeah, I'd like you to link me to some tuts regarding stuff like the trees and fabric folds. Other than those problem areas what you're trying to say is:

- Shadows should be deeper
- Arm on the viewer's right is too short
- Head's too small relative to the torso
- I can make the clouds more noticeable by adding gray shading

^ Did I understand that right?

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Arvatzc In reply to TidalEspeon [2015-10-01 10:33:49 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome Here: clothing juliajm15.deviantart.com/art/C… and trees part 1:tephra76.deviantart.com/art/Tr… Also take a look at this, is for backgrounds, and although is for traditional i think is very useful no matter the media: mireielle.deviantart.com/art/B…
- Yes
- Yes
- No, the proportion is good; i meant the face relative to the whole head: the eyes, nose and mouth are too "condensed" in the center of the face, in my opinion. Something like this: sta.sh/0nqo79l0bb0 (In the 2nd image i've only made head tinier and moved nose and mouth) I don't know if you get what i mean...
- Yes, grey or a very light blue Here's a tutorial about it: muhammadriza.deviantart.com/ar… , plus i think it gives cloud brushes

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TidalEspeon In reply to Arvatzc [2015-10-01 11:16:32 +0000 UTC]

I think I get it now I'll keep those resources around for next time I decide to draw this stuff.

I really appreciate the feedback ^^

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Arvatzc In reply to TidalEspeon [2015-10-04 09:49:20 +0000 UTC]

You're so welcome

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