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lonesome-wolf-child [2010-01-31 12:48:04 +0000 UTC]

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To start off with, this is a really adorable and sweet piece. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/a/a… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title="Aww - "/> 5/12 is one of my favourite OC/Canon pairings. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/a/a… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title="Aww - "/> I love the expressions and the way you've coloured this. The backround's texture is really really cool in my opinion and I like the lighting, how it gives the two their own little spotlight in the darkness. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/a/a… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title="Aww - "/> The details are very well displayed as well, espicially with the stitching and 12's ribbons. My only suggestion for improovement is the size of 5's head. It looks pretty big compared to his body and compared to 12's. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/a/a… " width="19" height="19" alt="" title="Sweating a little... - "/> It should be bigger than 12's head, since he is a male after all and males tend to be bigger than females, but his head is slightly bigger than it should be in my opinion. I'm unsure about the lines or part of 5's lower half of the body, located in the middle. It looks like it's the opening to his mechanical innards or however you want to word it (I'm not sure how to word it obviously) but I'm still not too sure. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/a/a… " width="19" height="19" alt="" title="Sweating a little... - "/> If that's the case, I also suggest making it not as noticable next time but only by a little bit. Lastly, I think you may've forgotten some of 12's ribbons around her foot, but with the computer I have, it's kind of hard to tell because the image is a little too dark than what I'm used to. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/a/a… " width="19" height="19" alt="" title="Sweating a little... - "/> Overall this was wonderfully done and is sooooo flipping adorable. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/h/h… " width="15" height="13" alt="" title="Heart - "/>

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snowdragongal [2010-02-11 22:59:41 +0000 UTC]

Aw so cute

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Lily-pily [2010-01-31 12:05:25 +0000 UTC]

Hehhhhhhhhhh....z'dawwwwwwwwwwwwwwww............8DDDDDDDDDDD this totally made my day! TOTALLY worth the wait. I LOVEEEEEEE it, Tifaaaaaaaa!
I REALLY love how you've drawn and shaded it just...gahhh. STAMPEDE OF EMOTICONS FOR YOUUUU! *tackles to floor* Thank you for this, I love it love it love it love it love it love it love it love it love it love it love it love it love it love it love it Random, but you REALLY blended the background well with them, and good job hiding 9 behind them. :3 *hides 9 in a box and flees with picture*

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pieface123 [2010-01-31 05:34:26 +0000 UTC]

Atta boy, 5 you stud muffin

Nice work on the posing and expressions here

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AnxiousMonster [2010-01-31 05:26:58 +0000 UTC]

aghh el amorr <3

i love this couple,, srsly,,, we need more art of them..>:C

12 is like -gasp my heroe,,, OK PUT ME DOWN NAO )

awesome details and the background is

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MissyMoizy [2010-01-31 05:04:10 +0000 UTC]

Awwwwwwwwwwww cute couple is cute.

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Ukariarti [2010-01-31 04:59:32 +0000 UTC]

thats adorable!! <33

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SpiralEnigma [2010-01-31 04:59:06 +0000 UTC]

Chloe linked me to this all excited. :3 Methinks she likes itttt...

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ThunderWolfang [2010-01-31 04:58:35 +0000 UTC]

Sweet! XD

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PokeCreature-Kid [2010-01-31 04:57:36 +0000 UTC]

5 being a brave-like hero ^^

Excellent job on everything~

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