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tigerlilykongadove — Dos and Dont's Part 1
Published: 2007-07-16 06:06:45 +0000 UTC; Views: 200; Favourites: 7; Downloads: 5
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Description Hold my hand,
Write my name in the sand.
Hold my heart,
just don't break it apart.
Write me a love song,
you can't sing it wrong.
Look into my eyes,
catch me by surprise.
Make me smile,
beacause we're worth the while.
Live and forget,
don't wallow in regret.
It won't all happen over night,
you need some time to make it right.
Don't waste your time lieing,
I won't waste my time crying.
Call me just to say good night,
I'll love you with all my might.
Think of me when you first wake up,
Give me more than a simple "sup".
Save me from my dark nightmares,
show me you're the one who cares.
Right me a sweet love note,
somehting only you could have wrote.
Show me how much I mean to you,
Doesn't matter what you do.
Carve our names in a tree,
show that we were meant to be.
Always try to make my day,
Don't let me slip away.
Don't be perfect or try to hard,
Don't going taking some other girl's card.
Don't let go,
and pull back slow.
Don't play it cool,
just kiss me you fool.
Now, make your feelings clear,
Just loud enough to hear.
These are my do's and don'ts of love
may they be with you, the heavens above.
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Comments: 22

MrsWeasley [2007-12-27 11:12:04 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful ! I love it...

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tigerlilykongadove In reply to MrsWeasley [2008-04-22 18:52:30 +0000 UTC]

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MrsWeasley [2007-12-27 11:11:17 +0000 UTC]

This is so sweet ! I love it !

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iveXtriedXandXfailed [2007-08-01 04:07:18 +0000 UTC]

This is awesome and truly amazing!!!

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tigerlilykongadove In reply to iveXtriedXandXfailed [2007-08-01 16:31:44 +0000 UTC]

Thanks ^^ I wrote it at like three in the morning, it's when I get most of my inspiration ^^

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iveXtriedXandXfailed In reply to tigerlilykongadove [2007-08-23 19:16:03 +0000 UTC]

That's funny . I'm thinking of starting to post some songs on here too....

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tigerlilykongadove In reply to iveXtriedXandXfailed [2007-08-24 03:11:59 +0000 UTC]

You should! They're really good!

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inamorata-smile [2007-07-16 06:15:39 +0000 UTC]

cute love

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tigerlilykongadove In reply to inamorata-smile [2007-07-16 06:19:53 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! ^^

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gothica166 [2007-07-16 06:11:19 +0000 UTC]

wow, i really like this its so awesome, now just to find a man that will follow these does and donts lol XD

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tigerlilykongadove In reply to gothica166 [2007-07-16 06:14:17 +0000 UTC]

Thanks ^^. It's hard, i haven't found him yet, but we are all still young and he's out there somewhere. That guy that doesn't have to follow them because he already knows them. ^^

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gothica166 In reply to tigerlilykongadove [2007-07-18 09:43:43 +0000 UTC]

yeah, i like to dream too...

lol XD jk ^^

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Rakumei-San [2007-07-16 06:08:42 +0000 UTC]

This is so cute and cleverly written! Faved!

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tigerlilykongadove In reply to Rakumei-San [2007-07-16 06:12:31 +0000 UTC]

Thank you, you really don't know how much that means. i;ve never written anything this good. Writting this late does help! lol

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Rakumei-San In reply to tigerlilykongadove [2007-07-16 06:14:33 +0000 UTC]

Haha, whatever works, eh? ^^

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tigerlilykongadove In reply to Rakumei-San [2007-07-16 06:19:38 +0000 UTC]

Whatever works.

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Synn-soulfire [2007-07-16 06:08:22 +0000 UTC]

Just so you know, reading this gave me goosebumps.

I really like it. :3

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tigerlilykongadove In reply to Synn-soulfire [2007-07-16 06:12:04 +0000 UTC]

I didn't expect replies so soon, thanks! I loved the feeling i got writing it too. ^^

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Synn-soulfire In reply to tigerlilykongadove [2007-07-16 06:13:56 +0000 UTC]

Saw it on the 'Newest' thing on the main page, and was like, 'Awr, what the hell? I'll read it.'

and I'm glad I did. :3

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tigerlilykongadove In reply to Synn-soulfire [2007-07-16 06:15:06 +0000 UTC]

Lol, nice way to be discovered^^ Thanks for not just glancing over!

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Synn-soulfire In reply to tigerlilykongadove [2007-07-16 06:17:18 +0000 UTC]

You are welcome. I know that I always hate it when I have a bajillion views, and even a favorite or two, but no comments and stuff. It happens to almost every deviation I have.

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tigerlilykongadove In reply to Synn-soulfire [2007-07-16 06:19:22 +0000 UTC]

I hate that too.

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