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SandstormVI [2013-05-28 14:53:03 +0000 UTC]
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To be honest, this is pretty amazing, the kittens are adorable and Ferncloud looks exactly how I would imagine her, the only thing is, she does look a bit like she is floating and her eyes don't really have enough depth. Brightheart looks amazing, I love the shading and her patches look amazing, she is exactly how I would imagine her, the lost-side of her face looks amazing, though it is only a small portion of the picture, you can tell right away, even though you haven't read the book, that it is Brightheart. The kits, now they aren't supposed to look like that but they are really adorable and the tiny paws on Brightheart's tail are just so cute.
I hope this sounds alright ^^
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timekept In reply to SandstormVI [2013-05-28 15:27:13 +0000 UTC]
haha thanks, but I really don't like this one anymore
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kate800 [2012-11-24 18:26:25 +0000 UTC]
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I have so much to say about this picture.
For one, Ferncloud's design is simply beautiful. I can really see why Dustpelt loves her. She's amazing and exactly how I imagined her.
Second, The texture effects and shading were remarkable. Unfortunately, there was little or no shading around Ferncloud's body. A simple mistake, it seems, but it doesn't give it much depth - she appears to be floating, almost.
I love the way you did the blood, although I doubt it would come out of her eyes like that. Although, it did well to add a creepy effect. I also love the look of one kit looking worried and the other reassuring him/her. And the way Brightheart is trying to keep them safe and innocent, though preferring not to look herself.
So, this is just what I thought of it; there are other things, too, though too much to sum up in just one critique! ^.^
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timekept In reply to kate800 [2012-11-24 19:54:07 +0000 UTC]
Thanks!
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ArmerSchwarzerKater [2012-04-18 15:24:31 +0000 UTC]
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D'aww, that was so sad. TT_TT Ferncloud has always been such a caring and gentle cat, she didn't deserve such a cruel death...Well, I guess none of the cats who died in that book deserved it...
You did a really good job on it, the picture looks fantastic and you captured this heart-wrenching scene really well. Especially the expressions of Brightheart and Ferncloud are fantastic. Brightheart looks so sorrowful and helpless, and Ferncloud somehow suprised as if she didn't see this coming.
I love the colouring, too, it does not seem too overloaded and is perfectly fine. Especially the blood looks very realistic and the anatomy is perfect (speaking for myself, I think it's pretty difficult to draw animals with the correct anatomy).
So, it's a really sad picture, but also totally awesome! I've to say I really envy your drawing skills, I wish I would be so talented...
Amazing picture, you have a new watcher!
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courtneyrc [2012-04-09 20:13:27 +0000 UTC]
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I have not yet read the book, yet I have heard that Ferncloud had died. From the description of the scene, it seems that you have really hit it spot on, including the placement of the characters. The character designs are exact for all the cats, including the two kits that were not described very well in the book. I love the fur texture and shading in this picture, it really makes it look real. The blood, although scary, is very realistic, and is also shaded well. I also think the anatomy of the cats are perfect, although the brown kit's head is a bit.. awkward. Other than that, I think that you did a wonderful job with this picture! c:
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timekept In reply to pavrzlove [2012-04-08 20:10:04 +0000 UTC]
thank you very much!
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pavrzlove In reply to timekept [2012-04-08 20:10:44 +0000 UTC]
not a problem~:3
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KAGEVISTA [2017-03-28 23:53:36 +0000 UTC]
These poor kits don't even know ;-;
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olsentwin89 [2016-12-12 04:06:42 +0000 UTC]
ha ther dumb
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FeatherofOwl [2016-02-07 13:22:01 +0000 UTC]
I cried so much at this scene! Love the picture, especially Brightheart's expression!
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timekept In reply to FeatherofOwl [2016-02-07 13:55:07 +0000 UTC]
omfg this one is so old and terrible i forgot how to draw cats or smth pls look at the newer one
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CookieBug121 [2015-12-19 19:12:50 +0000 UTC]
The death of the kit machine
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ThatOneWarriorsFan [2015-09-12 01:09:24 +0000 UTC]
No crying til the en-
Ah screw it, get out your tissues guys.
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Cornisch-Dragonisch [2015-03-21 07:44:59 +0000 UTC]
Aaawww... Their mother knows of course exactly what happened...
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DarkMrTyde [2015-01-27 00:22:19 +0000 UTC]
... I kinda like how you drew the kits better in thus one. Everything else was WAAAAYYYY better in the second version
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arodote [2015-01-26 18:25:52 +0000 UTC]
the kits are like: she is just sleeping, no?
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Dapplepetal [2014-09-27 17:17:16 +0000 UTC]
Ouchβ¦. Β Those poor kits don't even knowβ¦ They only are guessing... Β Β Β
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puppetmasterr [2014-05-12 00:11:09 +0000 UTC]
Wow. Her kits made it even more depressing.
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waterbase777 [2014-05-07 20:52:51 +0000 UTC]
Oh my glob, its so sad and ironic at the same time! It almost makes me cry! ):
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wildflre [2014-04-02 19:33:42 +0000 UTC]
That part just made me think, "How are they going to tell the poor kits?"
But this is really beautifully drawn, I like how you draw the lines, some think some thin.
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kathleens-art [2014-03-22 19:09:59 +0000 UTC]
Just finished reading this, so sad! Poor dustpelt!
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prettykittys [2013-12-01 05:45:05 +0000 UTC]
yep sleep totaly...
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Riiceversa [2013-05-30 22:10:11 +0000 UTC]
oh my god...this scene. i literally bawled for like 20 minutes omfg
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aquashadow11 [2013-04-21 08:19:34 +0000 UTC]
My fav character. Nooooooooooooo!
So sad but a really good dawing
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katbird0124 [2013-03-24 11:10:15 +0000 UTC]
i know ; ; The Last Hope was the saddest of all the books ive read
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BaileyTrave [2013-03-21 06:29:59 +0000 UTC]
awwwwww
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Fb-PHE13 [2013-03-10 03:04:55 +0000 UTC]
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Perfectly-Purnima [2013-01-30 05:34:38 +0000 UTC]
I just finished the last book yesterday.
I thought Hollyleaf's death was bad enough.
This was just heartbreaking.
Poor Dewkit is so naive about Ferncloud's death...
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ShyAnimal [2013-01-22 00:31:24 +0000 UTC]
Sad picture, But the words kinda cracked me up. x'D (I don't know rather to laugh or cry)..
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PercyJackson7 [2013-01-12 08:01:30 +0000 UTC]
WOW Looks like an animation part! It's sad
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Oreos-Splash [2013-01-10 04:57:05 +0000 UTC]
I'm smiling, and feeling disgusted right now(not at your skills, but at the drawing and the whole general feeling it invokes in me). A weird emotion.
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FantasyInsanity [2012-11-06 15:08:27 +0000 UTC]
amazing!!! *watches*
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