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Published: 2009-07-31 09:32:03 +0000 UTC; Views: 551; Favourites: 25; Downloads: 24
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Description I was bored and procrastinating today and I thought I'd take some photos.

These are the two rings I wear everyday. The one on top was my 18th birthday present from my Nan and the plan band is my girlfriends ring that I wear around my neck as it falls off my finger when I wear it.

This is probably one of my favourites from what I took, I may upload a picture of the set up I used to take the picture, it's rather amusing.

But yes, first thing I've uploaded in yonks. Enjoy.
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Comments: 16

Gibah [2009-07-31 09:52:49 +0000 UTC]

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I quite like how the second ring fades into the background - it's quote an effective way of drawing the eye and it does something else that I feel is very important, which is making the photo appear very dream-like. A short story could easily be written from this photo.

I like the gold chain too and the way it dangles out of the frame.

I don't like the background, however. Maybe you could touch it up using Photoshop or an equivalent. I don't like how it becomes soft on the right hand side. Its a bit at odds with what I was saying about the faded dreamlike quality of the rest of the picture but I feel that if you darkened that particular portion of the photograph even a little you would enhance the overall look of the piece.

Perhaps I need to clarify - The ring on top is so sharp and so crisp that it naturally forces the eye to come down and gaze upon the second ring almost melting into the golden background - why not help that along by sharpening the black background?

Other than that, a beautiful photograph that captures the sentimentality of the rings almost perfectly.

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TimeToComeClean In reply to Gibah [2009-07-31 09:57:17 +0000 UTC]

I completely agree about the background, I currently don't have anything like photoshop but I will put the effort into downloading one to fix this and future things. Either that or retake the photo, it wasn't too hard to set up.

I hadn't realised how gold I'd made it either, since both the rings and chain are silver but now you mention it I realise how gold it all is. I like it this way anyway but it's nice to have it brought to my attention.

Thanks for the critique, much appreciated.

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Gibah In reply to TimeToComeClean [2009-07-31 09:59:31 +0000 UTC]

Anytime!

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andanar [2009-09-05 15:21:52 +0000 UTC]

This kind of images are hard to get right but you've done a good job - well done.

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Tsukiko1313 [2009-08-04 05:32:07 +0000 UTC]

I love the golden lighting in it, it's pretty.

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redruM-110 [2009-08-03 12:22:16 +0000 UTC]

Long time no see Good photo, looks very professional. I like the two-tone background although maybe it's slightly too bright/saturated at the bottom half and so, some of the foreground detail's lost.

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MaliceTear [2009-08-03 11:22:13 +0000 UTC]

Focus and angle is interesting, the colour however seems over edited, too fake. The ring is being lost in a sea of yellow.

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NightIce [2009-08-02 01:42:40 +0000 UTC]

You uploaded something?! :scared:

Actually, this is an alright shot. The composition and depth of field is quite nice, although the front of the image is oh-so-very overexposed. If you dropped the exposure and gave the colours a little more lustre, it would be none too shabby.

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NightIce In reply to NightIce [2009-08-02 01:43:05 +0000 UTC]

Hooray for not remembering DA emotes?

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JosephBenton [2009-08-01 07:15:02 +0000 UTC]

This is very touching and sweet. The pic really brings that across.

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NocturnalZombi [2009-07-31 17:17:31 +0000 UTC]

Very nice. I like the picture, the color is really warm and welcoming.

^^

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TimeToComeClean In reply to NocturnalZombi [2009-08-01 04:17:31 +0000 UTC]

Aww thank you and for the fav too.

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NocturnalZombi In reply to TimeToComeClean [2009-08-01 04:24:38 +0000 UTC]

You are welcome. It's lovely.
^^

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Slayaplaya14 [2009-07-31 09:42:36 +0000 UTC]

its a bit hard to see both rings, but cool none the less

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TimeToComeClean In reply to Slayaplaya14 [2009-07-31 09:52:33 +0000 UTC]

Yeah I was mostly using the lower one to raise the upper one. It's just a plan tarnished band anyway. Thanks.

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Slayaplaya14 In reply to TimeToComeClean [2009-07-31 09:54:25 +0000 UTC]

Your welcome. Cool idea though. I may post more pics of my computer since im bored and have nothing better to do lol.

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