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Sasuke sat on the root of the ancient oak quietly watching Naruto swing back and forth on the swing. "Such loneliness" he thought to himself. However, secretly in his heart he longed for some time of solitude. Some time where he would be able to sit on the swing for himself and stare at the sun in quiet.
Shafts of light shone onto the momenting Naruto. This was not the first time he had been observing Sasuke as well. He had a longing to talk to Sasuke, the resident cool dude but a doubt lingered in his mind. Would he rather take a chance and end up being best of friends or instead being turned away like a common ratbag out on the street just like how he was normally treated by his peers.
"Ah, stuff this." His feet scraped the ground as he stopped the swing. Standing onto his feet he walked over to the boy sitting under the ancient oak.
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Does anyone wanna finish this story? lol
please post ur finished story as to how Sasuke got onto the swing in ur comment thanks =]

time taken: 5 hours

not bad actually, this is a kinda sorry present for not being online for 2 weeks. lol

Enjoy, God Bless
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TimFok In reply to ??? [2012-06-19 14:11:33 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for that! It's an interesting scenario how Naruto always ends up alone even though he doesn't want to but Sasuke's the one who actually prefers to be alone. In the first season anyway.

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scareysherrie74 In reply to TimFok [2012-08-01 14:36:49 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, I hear ya. I love Naruto for so many reasons but I truely get the growing up alone. My son just watched the first season again (probably the 10th or 100th time). It is my favorite, after all it is the start of such an amazing story.

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whatnya [2011-09-21 00:44:13 +0000 UTC]

the best of sasuke I have ever seen

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TimFok In reply to whatnya [2011-09-23 08:01:38 +0000 UTC]

thank you!

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JulietfoundherRomeo [2011-07-09 15:28:05 +0000 UTC]

One of my Favorites of sasuke that i have ever seen.

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TimFok In reply to JulietfoundherRomeo [2011-07-12 05:11:26 +0000 UTC]

thanks and thanks too for the fav

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JulietfoundherRomeo In reply to TimFok [2011-07-12 23:25:54 +0000 UTC]

You're Welcome

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halla1995 [2011-06-01 20:42:54 +0000 UTC]

cool

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TimFok In reply to halla1995 [2011-06-16 07:57:42 +0000 UTC]

thank you

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PixieMilktoast [2011-04-04 00:25:32 +0000 UTC]

The coloring is awesome. You should do one of Naruto in this position.

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TimFok In reply to PixieMilktoast [2011-04-14 05:31:21 +0000 UTC]

thanks but there's one actually out there already where i got the inspiration from. check it out if you have time
[link]

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PixieMilktoast In reply to TimFok [2011-04-14 21:38:34 +0000 UTC]

Hmm... it's good, but your coloring is better.

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TimFok In reply to PixieMilktoast [2011-04-15 12:02:01 +0000 UTC]

haha, ill take that compliment then

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PixieMilktoast In reply to TimFok [2011-04-28 02:51:42 +0000 UTC]

'Twas intended as one, my friend.

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Hinata-Chan34 [2009-10-10 16:39:00 +0000 UTC]

Awesome!

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Havent-Slept-A-Wink [2009-10-05 00:39:52 +0000 UTC]

Sorry it took me a while to comment, and that I favorited this before I commented, but I really just wanted to be able to come back and see this picture again. I love it so much. It's beautifully drawn and I adore the way Sasuke is dressed. Awesome job

And here's my continuation of your story above. I'm pretty proud of the way it came out, so would you mind if I posted it here? I'll give you full credit for the first few paragraphs, and provide a link to this picture. Let me know

β€œHey, I'm Naruto,” the blonde boy said shyly to the very intimidating teen sitting in front of him. Sasuke just turned his head the other way, ignoring him.
β€œUm, is there any room for me under the tree?” Naruto asked.
Sasuke shot his head toward Naruto. β€œNo,” he snapped. β€œNow get away from me, loser.”
β€œFine. Whatever.” Naruto walked away, trying to look nonchalant, like he didn't even care he was just shot down and turned away for the millionth time in his life. On the inside, though, he was hurting, even more than ever before. His eyes began to water, but he quickly wiped them away. He wasn't going to cry. Not over something so small like this. No. He was done crying.
Sasuke watched Naruto leave the schoolyard out of the corner of his eye. As soon as he was sure the boy was gone, he got up from his place at the oak tree, and made his way over to the swing. He sat down and pushed himself back and forth slightly, the tips of his feet never actually leaving their spot. He started to look around. He noticed how far off the swing was from everyone and everything else at the school. The girls gossiping underneath the basketball nets never seemed so far away from Sasuke. Even the tree he was sitting under just moments ago seemed miles away. And that's when he realized something. A feeling lingered over the swing, and that feeling was loneliness.
Sasuke was finally beginning to understand Naruto. That poor boy who sat in that very swing everyday after school was truly and utterly lonely. He had no one. No friends, not even family. No one at school or in the whole village wanted anything to do with him, and his parents have been long since dead. To have absolutely no one, and still try to find someone to care about him. In a way, he was stronger than Sasuke, and Sasuke started to develop a feeling of admiration for Naruto because of that.
And, as Sasuke sat on that swing and thought some more, he became aware of how much he and Naruto were alike. He, too, was alone. His parents and the rest of his clan have been gone for years, and despite the fact he was so popular, he didn't have any real friends. The girls just fawned over him like fans, and the boys just wanted to hang around him to feel cool. They didn't really care about him. No one did. And he longed for someone who would, just like Naruto.
The next day, right after school let out, there was Naruto on his swing, and Sasuke under the ancient oak tree. The girls were talking and giggling underneath the basketball nets, and the boys were trying to either flirt with the girls, or get them to move so they could play basketball. Everything was the same as it was any day after school, except today, instead of just observing Naruto from afar, Sasuke stood up from his position under the oak tree and strolled over to the lonely boy on the swing.
β€œHey,” he said quietly. β€œI'm Sasuke.”
β€œI know who you are,” Naruto grumbled, looking away from the figure towering over him. β€œWhat do you want?”
β€œI'm sorry,” Sasuke said sincerely.
Naruto looked up at Sasuke, knowing completely well that he meant what he said.
β€œIs there any room for me under the tree?” Sasuke asked, a smile playing on his lips.
Naruto beamed. β€œSure, go right ahead.”
Sasuke sat beside Naruto on the ground and Naruto continued to sit on the swing. Neither of them talked for a while. They just sat there together, ignoring the gossiping whispers about them from the girls and boys across the playground.
Finally, after the sun started to set and the other students began to say their goodbyes to their friends and go home, Sasuke spoke.
β€œSo,” he said, β€œdoes this mean we're friends?”
Naruto looked down at him and answered, β€œI think so. Wouldn't you know when you've made a new friend?”
β€œNot really. I've never had a friend before.”
β€œBut what about--”
Sasuke cut him off. β€œThey're not real friends. They just pretend to be to feel cool, or whatever their bizarre reason is.”
β€œOh. I've never had a friend before either. So, I guess we're both each other's first friend.”
β€œYeah, I guess so.”

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TimFok In reply to Havent-Slept-A-Wink [2009-10-07 06:33:06 +0000 UTC]

excellent
i had forgotten about the whole story thing.
You're a very talented writer.

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Havent-Slept-A-Wink In reply to TimFok [2009-10-08 00:54:40 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much! That means a lot

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peterandwendy [2009-05-30 11:12:45 +0000 UTC]

poor emo sasuke

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Sesshoumarus-girl [2009-01-12 17:08:16 +0000 UTC]

so awsome! *faves*

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TimFok In reply to Sesshoumarus-girl [2009-01-30 03:08:56 +0000 UTC]

thankyou

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Sesshoumarus-girl In reply to TimFok [2009-01-30 13:54:03 +0000 UTC]

anytime

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Sesshoumarus-girl In reply to TimFok [2009-01-30 13:53:56 +0000 UTC]

anytime

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Laws-of-alchemy [2008-11-08 03:07:42 +0000 UTC]

This is really awesome and well, sad...but it's meant to look that way so good job!

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TimFok In reply to Laws-of-alchemy [2008-11-19 06:35:17 +0000 UTC]

thanks

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Sleepless-Shazaria [2008-04-02 07:49:44 +0000 UTC]

I am in lurve with this picture...
The colouring is amazing.
And the story is looking good, too... I would attempt to finish it if I didn't have this huge creative block thing going on lol.

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TimFok In reply to Sleepless-Shazaria [2008-04-04 08:13:19 +0000 UTC]

thanks, and dont sweat over the story, only one person's actually written an ending lol.

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blooIllusion [2007-10-27 12:42:05 +0000 UTC]

I think it's amazing, it's a really good work. I had already seen it at NarutoFan.com, but I'll fav anyway

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TimFok In reply to blooIllusion [2007-10-28 06:03:53 +0000 UTC]

narutofan.com? whats your username?

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blooIllusion In reply to TimFok [2007-10-29 13:59:20 +0000 UTC]

bloosharingan, I had commented your profile

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TimFok In reply to blooIllusion [2007-10-30 10:27:12 +0000 UTC]

ooh, yes, i see it

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ino-chanlove [2007-09-08 02:25:31 +0000 UTC]

I don't like Sasuke, but this is brilliant.

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TimFok In reply to ino-chanlove [2007-09-09 08:52:44 +0000 UTC]

wow, thanks

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youngsasuke [2007-08-11 16:47:06 +0000 UTC]

Lovely picture. You can really feel the sadness in this pic.

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TimFok In reply to youngsasuke [2007-08-12 01:31:03 +0000 UTC]

thankyou

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avatar-fangirl [2007-08-02 20:10:31 +0000 UTC]

SASUKE LOOKS SO HOT IN THIS PIC!!!! well, hes hot anyway but this pic is like WOW!

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TimFok In reply to avatar-fangirl [2007-08-05 07:54:22 +0000 UTC]

thank you

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Marykke [2007-06-12 03:18:28 +0000 UTC]

oo this is a great pic... sasuke looks so hot... lolz
k, here's me trying to end your story!!

"You're Sasuke, right? I'm Naruto." Naruto said as he walked up to Sasuke. "Do you mind if I sit with you?"
"No, it's okay, go ahead." Sasuke patted the ground next to him, and Naruto sat. They sat together in silence for a while, until Naruto spoke.
"Thank you for letting me sit here... All the other kids just push me away as soon as I go near them..." Naruto felt his eyes start to water. Even though Sasuke hadn't really actually done anything for him, letting Naruto sit there was the nicest thing any of the other kids had done for him. Naruto wiped his eyes and tried to seem tougher then he really was. He didn't want Sasuke to think of him as weak. Sasuke sighed.
"Naruto, just because the other kids don't like you, doesn't mean there's something wrong with you. You can be whatever you want to be. Even Hokage."
Naruto, though he tried his best, was starting to cry now. This boy, the most popular boy in the village, was being so nice to him... Even though they barely knew each other.
Naruto and Sasuke talked for the rest of the night, and into the morning to. They realized that they had more in common then they thought, and by the end, they were the best of friends.
Naruto didn't want to hurt Sasuke's reputation by being around him in front of people. Naruto insisted that he and Sasuke not communicate during the day, and that they'd only talk at night. Sasuke agreed reluctantly. So, every night, in secret, Naruto and Sasuke met, and talked for hours on end. Until one day...
"Sasuke, what do you think of Sakura?" Naruto asked, a bit shyly...
"Do you promise not to tell?" Sasuke asked.
Naruto nodded.
"Actually, I really like her... I have a bit of a crush on her." Sasuke said, blushing.
"Sasuke... I like her, too." Naruto answered, sadly.
This was the end of Naruto and Sasuke's friendship. It was around the same time that Sakura ended her friendship with Ino to compete for Sasuke's love. Sadly, before Sakura could show Sasuke how much she liked him, Sasuke realized that his training was the most important thing to him and that girls would just get in the way. He quickly forgot all about Sakura.
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Hah, whoa this was random... Well I hope you like it!! It doesn't really justify the rivalry Naruto and Sasuke have now... but anyways, I tried
And i dont know if it goes with the rest of the series... I only started watching Naruto about a week ago and im only on the 34th episode... lol

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TimFok In reply to Marykke [2007-06-13 09:42:24 +0000 UTC]

GREAT! your`re the first one whose actually comnpleted the story. lol
So Sasuke liked Sakura eh? Awesome work. And you only started naruto a week ago?! Man, good luck finishing all the episodes.

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Marykke In reply to TimFok [2007-06-13 21:10:18 +0000 UTC]

haha yeah... well i didnt know how else to make it lolz!!
and thanks! its going well though, I can usually watch at least 2 or 3 a day, if not a lot more

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TimFok In reply to Marykke [2007-06-14 11:23:34 +0000 UTC]

it reminds me of the time FoxKids was doing a Sailor Moon Marathon and because it was the holidays me and my sister just sat on the couch watching Sailor Moon all day for 2 weeks. And also of the time i came back from overseas with the Naruto DVD set and i watched around 2-3 episodes a day after school.
Aahh, those crazy days.

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Marykke In reply to TimFok [2007-06-14 21:14:59 +0000 UTC]

lol!!! haha yeah.. i'm kinda like that right now
im soo obsessed

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ninjagirl-rukai [2007-06-10 22:13:49 +0000 UTC]

this is really cool. a reminder of naruto when he was in the academy! great job and keep on working!!!

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TimFok In reply to ninjagirl-rukai [2007-06-11 11:29:06 +0000 UTC]

thanks! =] glad to know you like it!

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ninjagirl-rukai In reply to TimFok [2007-06-12 02:14:17 +0000 UTC]

well it was pretty neat though. you should keep drawing like that!! well see ya!

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mon2x [2007-04-29 07:18:02 +0000 UTC]

i like your coloring very much <3 keep up the good work <3

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TimFok In reply to mon2x [2007-04-29 12:13:51 +0000 UTC]

aw
thankyou

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Kel-bel [2007-04-18 01:19:02 +0000 UTC]

i love ur art! this is great!!!!

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TimFok In reply to Kel-bel [2007-04-19 10:54:26 +0000 UTC]

thanks]
its a shame though that i cant do anymore like this though until next year lol

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Kel-bel In reply to TimFok [2007-04-21 16:55:29 +0000 UTC]

yeah! but theyre great!

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