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Published: 2005-09-20 03:44:30 +0000 UTC; Views: 144; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 5
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I'm pretty sure we can all call it a dayif
you label me as
the
immature
inexperienced
fuck up
here.
I'm
fairly certain
I can miss
a few more
important parts of my life
if you just
step back a little
and
feed me more
metal
uncertainties.
So what
if I'm the
ever elusive
skeptic?
So
what?
I'm so silly
I'm so
young and
can't handle
you.
I can handle
a little bit more
than you'd think,
doll.
I can swallow
sharper
than what
you've been
feeding me,
love.
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Comments: 5
ow. im feeling sharp things poking you, and i feel so bad. neice peice, though. and another cheers to the screenshot.
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how cold and hard. and it fits that i can hear the coyotes howling in the hills as i read this.
i really like the opening set, about the clutch. that can sum up alot of things in life.
and i like the cover pick, the wisp of hair is pretty.
later gorgeous.
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the structure is creative and is obviously sharp and to the point. Im sorry if you feel something more excruiciating than pain. theres no word for it. well i hope all is well. good work. i applaud you
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Very raw. I like the structure.. the tone and the overall feel of this poem. Nice job.
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