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Tinling-Liu — The Shadow Page 3
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Published: 2017-07-06 11:38:56 +0000 UTC; Views: 315; Favourites: 5; Downloads: 0
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I'm lovin' this comic so far, good job with the characters and story = w =b
A bit of dialogue that made me confused was when the angel said, "But you didn't give a damn about what I said, which made me a hard time to get my extra income." I think instead of saying "which made me a hard time," say "which gave me a hard time" or "which made me have a hard time..." I think both of those could work nicely with the sentence structure =v=
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Ah, yes, that makes sense!. I fixed it.
Thanks for your correction, and I'm glad you love this comic.
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