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Published: 2013-01-29 20:07:02 +0000 UTC; Views: 7956; Favourites: 132; Downloads: 0
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Cover Story in Comic to Lucy in the SkyBlack and white pages of Lucy in the sky
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the only issue i really see is the diamond looking shape it throws the design off it doesn't feel like it belongs in the piece at all it also draws you away from the more important subjects (the characters)
maybe if you made it more transparent and you could see the other objects and colors behind it might look better
or another solution might just be to make it smaller you have a lot of colors and shape going on and if your not careful you can over crowd the art piece and throw off the balance
other than that your color scheme is unique or at least I've never seen anyone use that color scheme before
the drawing style is very well done and creative and a little random to the audience or it seems that way to me but it works for you
overall its a good piece of art just that the diamond throws it off but im sure if you want to keep that in this piece there are ways you can figure out how to make it work
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Thanks for the review.
The idea was that the diamond service text box of a future review on the back cover.
The cover will be displayed with the art I re posted.
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your welcome
and oh i see well then lower its opacity to make it a little see threw it will make it go better most likely
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Awesome (first i thought your talking about "Lucy from Elfenlied" they have the same hair color and and and...)
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