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(Thought I should completely revamp Jackie's design, backstory, and personality)

JACKIE PROFILE:
Composed by EmeraldThunderComics
OC belongs to EmeraldThunderComics

Basic Facts-

Full Name: Jacqueline Raymond McKousky
BR Callsign: Pyrodactyl
Age: 24
Species: Peregrine falcon
Nationality: South Saraxian-Emrovian
Birthdate: July 6th
Birthplace: Marzrin, South Saraxia
Current Place: Bristol Manor, Alostet, Emrovia.
Moral Alignment: Chaotic Good.

Family:
Father: Jorge McKousky (Alive, aged 48)
Mother: Laura McKousky (Deceased, aged 44)
Brother: Daniel McKousky (Alive, aged 27)

Physical Features-
Feather Color: Black, tan, and white)
Hair Color: Gray
Size: 5'10"
Weight: 150 lbs.
Body Type: Tall, medium built with thicker thighs. Muscled arms and upper body due to experience with flying
Blood Type: A+

Powers-
- Pyrokinesis (Only usable when stressed or angered, only brought to full power wearing her armor)
- Battle uniform allows her to take her flames into their ultimate power, such as shooting heat rays from her visor as well as dropping fire clouds from her wings.

Abilities-
- Flight using her natural wings, could reach up to 44 mph.
- Powerful legs used for kicking.
- Good at karate and kickboxing.
- Excellent swimmer.
- Expert mechanic and engineer.
- Strong endurance.

Sexuality-

Orientation: Gay
Turn On's: Two-piece swimsuits, skimpy outfits, those shorter than her, long-haired women, slender figures.
Turn Off's: Poor hygiene, buns, thick glasses, obesity, bad smell and breath, bondage.

Personality-

Traits: Cocky, short-tempered, humorous, determined, kind.

Overview:
Jackie is a free spirit who often likes to perform her own stunts as well as explore as much as she can. She can be very cocky and stubborn about her abilities, almost to the point of not handling criticism. It mainly takes a while for her to understand what she's doing wrong until it hits her right in the face. She also has anger-management problems too, as she can be quick to anger, especially when one criticizes her skills or brings up her family. She is also determined and desperate to save her brother from Cronex hands. However, she also has a gentle side as she can be quite humorous and mischievous to her peers, often pulling pranks on them as well as getting under people's skin, not to mention she can make jokes to cheer people up when in need, and overall likes to have fun when not on missions. She is also kind and gentle for the little ones too, especially with little kids as they are the most fragile and innocent people in the world. Sometimes, she even likes to visit children's hospitals and impress the sick kids, and even allow them to ride her.

Goals: To save her brother from Cronex hands as well as bring him back to his senses, to become the best pilot in the Bullet Rangers.

Likes/Dislikes-

Likes: Flying, racing, swimming, fighting enemy jets and planes, her battle uniform, her powers, saving people, Brooke, video-games, children, impressing James and Tiffany, Emily, being a lifeguard, her swimsuit, action movies, kaiju movies, football, heated areas.

Dislikes: The Cronex Empire, homophobes, being called a freak, girly things, being treated like a child, romance movies, not being able to prove herself, being called a coward, her brother's misfortune.

Favorite Food: Shrimp
Favorite Drink: Red Bull
Favorite Color: Red
Favorite Music: Power Metal

Employment-
- Bullet Rangers Pilot & Engineer (Full-time)

- Lifeguard at the Emerald Thunder Aquatic Center (Part-Time)

- Cook at Omega Burger (Former)

-Known Languages-
- English
- South Saraxian

Misc. Info-

Driver's License: Yes

Attire: Yellow, orange, and red tank-top, dark red shorts with red and yellow stripes, gray and red shoes, gray and black belt.

Swimsuit: Yellow and Orange bikini.

People of Interest-
Jorge McKousky- Her father who she was very close with compared to her mother. Got her into engineering as he was the CEO of McKousky Industries as well as teaching her how to fly.

Laura McKousky- Her mother who was a lifeguard. They were close together as she taught Jackie how to swim, but committed suicide at age 15.

Daniel McKousky- Her big brother who was the closest thing she had as a friend when she was a kid. When he went MIA, he inspired her to overcome her fear of heights and learn to fly.

Brooke Walker- Her girlfriend. Managed to rescue her cousin Tabitha from drowning which quickly made her trust Jackie. Also both have powers and were known as freaks to the rest of the world.

Tabitha Walker- One of her closer friends who she treats as a little sister.

James Bristol- Is good friends with him and trusts him since he served with her brother Daniel when he was an Emrovian Marine. He hired her as a Ranger due to seeing her amazing flying ability.

Tiffany Zeola- Is a fellow lifeguard, and close friends.

Impairments:
- Her pyrokinesis without her body armor would damage her body and feathers if overused, as well as causing her very bad migraines.

- Can be quick to anger and get ahead of herself when insulted or under stress.

- Can't take criticism unless it severely damages her or has big effects.

- Has a fear of failure, and as a result can be very insecure about her skills and ability to perform tasks.

- Can't use her fire powers when wet.

Backstory:

Jacqueline McKousky was born three years after her brother Daniel to Jorge and Laura, in a mansion at South Saraxia. Jorge worked as CEO for McKousky Industries while her mother was a lifeguard at the local lake. However, unlike her brother, Jackie's wings developed slower, and as a result stuck to the land which got her bullied in school, as well as made her envious for her brother. Jackie would have more of a connection with her father than her mother, which gives her more of a tomboyish personality as he often taught her about math, science, and robotics in order to make up for her lack of wings. Laura also would've taught Jackie how to swim which would've been one of her best skills in life. Jackie mainly loved to swim due to it being the closest to flying.

When she was in her teens, something rare happened to her, as she suddenly gains pyrokinesis as she went through puberty. It was revealed later that she inherited this mysterious power from her father Jorge, who was actually a former experiment by the Emrovian government, as he served as a supersoldier during the Emro-Saraxian War. Jorge would've hid this fact out of guilt and sorrow for the deaths he caused with this ability, and vowed to never teach Jackie how to use it. When Jackie got bullied in school, she ended up unleashing her flames which gave a student 2nd degree burns and sent him to the hospital. As a result, Jackie would've gotten expelled from school, though Jorge would've homeschooled her and got her to work when she was fifteen. For months, she would've worked at the fast-food restauarant Omega Burger as a cook, though she hated that job.

Tragedy would strike when Daniel, who entered into the EMC (Emrovian Marine Corps) went missing in action. Her mother would've killed herself from grief and depression after hearing about her son's disappearance, while Jackie is taken in by Jorge. Eventually, this death would've gotten Jackie to overcome her fear of heights as she persuades her father to teach her how to fly, as well as train her to be a capable fighter like he did, and master her power. He even helps her build a suit made out of flame-resistant fabrics and metal, which would also help focus her flames and condense her heat into a heat beam from her visor. After the disappearance of her brother and the death of her mother, Jackie would be reborn as Pyrodactyl, a mercenary that would take on Cronex jets, and be a menace to the skies.

Jackie would gain notoriety among the Cronex and Emrovian forces as nobody knew which side Pyrodactyl was on, as she often went on killing sprees, taking out terrorists and criminals with her suit on. This would even impress James Bristol, the leader of the Bullet Rangers, to the point of him persuing her trails and confronting her to a fight. During which, she defeats the mercenary, but spares him as the two have a common goal, which is to take revenge on the Cronex. She eventually joins the Bullet Rangers as their helicopter pilot and a fighter.

Description

(Thought I should completely revamp Jackie's design, backstory, and personality)

JACKIE PROFILE:
Composed by EmeraldThunderComics
OC belongs to EmeraldThunderComics

Basic Facts-

Full Name: Jacqueline Raymond McKousky
BR Callsign: Pyrodactyl
Age: 24
Species: Peregrine falcon
Nationality: South Saraxian-Emrovian
Birthdate: July 6th
Birthplace: Marzrin, South Saraxia
Current Place: Bristol Manor, Alostet, Emrovia.
Moral Alignment: Chaotic Good.

Family:
Father: Jorge McKousky (Alive, aged 48)
Mother: Laura McKousky (Deceased, aged 44)
Brother: Daniel McKousky (Alive, aged 27)

Physical Features-
Feather Color: Black, tan, and white)
Hair Color: Gray
Size: 5'10"
Weight: 150 lbs.
Body Type: Tall, medium built with thicker thighs. Muscled arms and upper body due to experience with flying
Blood Type: A+

Powers-
- Pyrokinesis (Only usable when stressed or angered, only brought to full power wearing her armor)
- Battle uniform allows her to take her flames into their ultimate power, such as shooting heat rays from her visor as well as dropping fire clouds from her wings.

Abilities-
- Flight using her natural wings, could reach up to 44 mph.
- Powerful legs used for kicking.
- Good at karate and kickboxing.
- Excellent swimmer.
- Expert mechanic and engineer.
- Strong endurance.

Sexuality-

Orientation: Gay
Turn On's: Two-piece swimsuits, skimpy outfits, those shorter than her, long-haired women, slender figures.
Turn Off's: Poor hygiene, buns, thick glasses, obesity, bad smell and breath, bondage.

Personality-

Traits: Cocky, short-tempered, humorous, determined, kind.

Overview:
Jackie is a free spirit who often likes to perform her own stunts as well as explore as much as she can. She can be very cocky and stubborn about her abilities, almost to the point of not handling criticism. It mainly takes a while for her to understand what she's doing wrong until it hits her right in the face. She also has anger-management problems too, as she can be quick to anger, especially when one criticizes her skills or brings up her family. She is also determined and desperate to save her brother from Cronex hands. However, she also has a gentle side as she can be quite humorous and mischievous to her peers, often pulling pranks on them as well as getting under people's skin, not to mention she can make jokes to cheer people up when in need, and overall likes to have fun when not on missions. She is also kind and gentle for the little ones too, especially with little kids as they are the most fragile and innocent people in the world. Sometimes, she even likes to visit children's hospitals and impress the sick kids, and even allow them to ride her.

Goals: To save her brother from Cronex hands as well as bring him back to his senses, to become the best pilot in the Bullet Rangers.

Likes/Dislikes-

Likes: Flying, racing, swimming, fighting enemy jets and planes, her battle uniform, her powers, saving people, Brooke, video-games, children, impressing James and Tiffany, Emily, being a lifeguard, her swimsuit, action movies, kaiju movies, football, heated areas.

Dislikes: The Cronex Empire, homophobes, being called a freak, girly things, being treated like a child, romance movies, not being able to prove herself, being called a coward, her brother's misfortune.

Favorite Food: Shrimp
Favorite Drink: Red Bull
Favorite Color: Red
Favorite Music: Power Metal

Employment-
- Bullet Rangers Pilot & Engineer (Full-time)

- Lifeguard at the Emerald Thunder Aquatic Center (Part-Time)

- Cook at Omega Burger (Former)

-Known Languages-
- English
- South Saraxian

Misc. Info-

Driver's License: Yes

Attire: Yellow, orange, and red tank-top, dark red shorts with red and yellow stripes, gray and red shoes, gray and black belt.

Swimsuit: Yellow and Orange bikini.

People of Interest-
Jorge McKousky- Her father who she was very close with compared to her mother. Got her into engineering as he was the CEO of McKousky Industries as well as teaching her how to fly.

Laura McKousky- Her mother who was a lifeguard. They were close together as she taught Jackie how to swim, but committed suicide at age 15.

Daniel McKousky- Her big brother who was the closest thing she had as a friend when she was a kid. When he went MIA, he inspired her to overcome her fear of heights and learn to fly.

Brooke Walker- Her girlfriend. Managed to rescue her cousin Tabitha from drowning which quickly made her trust Jackie. Also both have powers and were known as freaks to the rest of the world.

Tabitha Walker- One of her closer friends who she treats as a little sister.

James Bristol- Is good friends with him and trusts him since he served with her brother Daniel when he was an Emrovian Marine. He hired her as a Ranger due to seeing her amazing flying ability.

Tiffany Zeola- Is a fellow lifeguard, and close friends.

Impairments:
- Her pyrokinesis without her body armor would damage her body and feathers if overused, as well as causing her very bad migraines.

- Can be quick to anger and get ahead of herself when insulted or under stress.

- Can't take criticism unless it severely damages her or has big effects.

- Has a fear of failure, and as a result can be very insecure about her skills and ability to perform tasks.

- Can't use her fire powers when wet.

Backstory:

Jacqueline McKousky was born three years after her brother Daniel to Jorge and Laura, in a mansion at South Saraxia. Jorge worked as CEO for McKousky Industries while her mother was a lifeguard at the local lake. However, unlike her brother, Jackie's wings developed slower, and as a result stuck to the land which got her bullied in school, as well as made her envious for her brother. Jackie would have more of a connection with her father than her mother, which gives her more of a tomboyish personality as he often taught her about math, science, and robotics in order to make up for her lack of wings. Laura also would've taught Jackie how to swim which would've been one of her best skills in life. Jackie mainly loved to swim due to it being the closest to flying.

When she was in her teens, something rare happened to her, as she suddenly gains pyrokinesis as she went through puberty. It was revealed later that she inherited this mysterious power from her father Jorge, who was actually a former experiment by the Emrovian government, as he served as a supersoldier during the Emro-Saraxian War. Jorge would've hid this fact out of guilt and sorrow for the deaths he caused with this ability, and vowed to never teach Jackie how to use it. When Jackie got bullied in school, she ended up unleashing her flames which gave a student 2nd degree burns and sent him to the hospital. As a result, Jackie would've gotten expelled from school, though Jorge would've homeschooled her and got her to work when she was fifteen. For months, she would've worked at the fast-food restauarant Omega Burger as a cook, though she hated that job.

Tragedy would strike when Daniel, who entered into the EMC (Emrovian Marine Corps) went missing in action. Her mother would've killed herself from grief and depression after hearing about her son's disappearance, while Jackie is taken in by Jorge. Eventually, this death would've gotten Jackie to overcome her fear of heights as she persuades her father to teach her how to fly, as well as train her to be a capable fighter like he did, and master her power. He even helps her build a suit made out of flame-resistant fabrics and metal, which would also help focus her flames and condense her heat into a heat beam from her visor. After the disappearance of her brother and the death of her mother, Jackie would be reborn as Pyrodactyl, a mercenary that would take on Cronex jets, and be a menace to the skies.

Jackie would gain notoriety among the Cronex and Emrovian forces as nobody knew which side Pyrodactyl was on, as she often went on killing sprees, taking out terrorists and criminals with her suit on. This would even impress James Bristol, the leader of the Bullet Rangers, to the point of him persuing her trails and confronting her to a fight. During which, she defeats the mercenary, but spares him as the two have a common goal, which is to take revenge on the Cronex. She eventually joins the Bullet Rangers as their helicopter pilot and a fighter.