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Published: 2012-05-05 01:14:21 +0000 UTC; Views: 2756; Favourites: 68; Downloads: 33
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BITCH, YOU DID NOT JUST INSULT AME'S CARTOONS.Just a TEENSY bit later than usual, my graphics card died and I had to replace it and arrrgggh. >:C
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I always try to avoid commenting on a page that was posted weeks ago but I really do have something to say about this one... and it's not about the page itself. It's just the transitioning from this page from the last. I dunno whether to say it was weak or doesn't make much sense but it just bothers me. The last page ended with Emerald and Carval being blown up (or getting knocked away from the blast) and then suddenly, they're on their feet and Emerald's headphones get destroyed. Did they land on their feet or fall on their faces? I know you want to keep each page interesting and maybe showing them landing from the explosion and Ame sending out her attack isn't but try not to let the transitioning of pages suffer as a result.
There's my nitpicky Mcpickerson and how dare she insult Jellyfish Princess or whatever it was called.
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They didn't suffer any damage from the previous page, BUT yes a transitional panel for pacing would definitely tighten things up! A mistake on my part.
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Ohhh-ho-HOOOO! Now you're really asking for it, Emerald, for dissing Ame's unique taste in anime.
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Mess with the headphones and you get horns............so to speak.
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lol, demon's making fun of each other's muses, it's like watching a yo momma fight, almost guaranteed to be hilarious
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I just noticed how awesome Emerald's horns are.
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Thanks very much! Part of her design for the verse.
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You always have such fun ideas.
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destroy my booze and i will destroy you scenario, well this will be awesome
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well the only way to make this even cooler would be (dramatic pause) booze rocket launcher!
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Oooooh snap. You don't rip on someones cartoons... Without paying for it...!!!
So a charge attach was to just destroy shades...? I guess that's Ame for ya...
Great work.
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Area of effect type attacks tend to be weaker overall - but they cover a BIIIIG area!
Thanks!
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*feign innocence* i know, thoses poor headphones, i was aiming to take your head off and leave them unharmed for meeeee~
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ABSORB HER TITS INTO YOU, AME. GAIN HER POWERZ!
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ALSO MORE GREEN HAIRS~
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OMFGZ THEM GREEN HAIRZ
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HOW DARE EMERALD INSULT THE DELIGHT THAT IS ROYAL JELLY COMPLEX. >8C
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THROW ALL OF THE SEA CUCUMBER AND HERMIT CRABS AT HER.
... Royal Jelly Complex is awesome. ; n;
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I think the red part of Ame's clothes (not sure what you'd call them) are sentient. That or her outfit demands a LOT of dramatic wind.
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...Well, I guess there are weirder things for a succubus to have. XD
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uuuh that wasn't so funny at all about what she said. I would be very offended. XD
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Eventually to be joined by two others. Maybe.
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Well... to be fair, they did attack Ame unprovoked, in public, from behind and without warning, want to talk about dick moves they did kinde of start it.
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Yuuuuuuuuup, but at least we're aware as t'why! ...Not that it makes it any better for Ame ;_;
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Seems a lot of berserk buttons are getting pressed today.
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Yep, granted demons are bound to have a fair few of those, they feisty~
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Uh oh. Both of them are now angry over their muses. This can only mean one thing:
FIGHT!!
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