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M4l1ci0u5 [2013-09-06 15:49:32 +0000 UTC]

U misspelled. "Dropes" should be "drops"

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mck-mck [2013-08-15 20:49:23 +0000 UTC]

Yeah buddy!!! Raphael is big bro boss being Donnie's protector !! I'm so happy because of this!
English: 

Second panel "wounds healed quicker" it sounds like it's in the past tense, so it would imply they no longer posses the ability so you were probably going for "wounds heal quicker".

Fourth panel: spelling error, "dropes" should be "drops". Also "if he eats the food with..." could be "if he eats food with..." but by keeping the unnecessary "the" in there, it sounds like an accent which is pretty cool. The last speech bubble there, past tense so he used to cough due to foul air, if you want the past tense then you're spot on but if he still coughs due to the air then "he will cough heavily if he breathes the foul air" - it's just that in the first two bubbles you say "could" meaning it's still possible, I can't really explain it but it's like you switch from present to past tense which my English teacher has always scolded me for 

 Panel Five: spelling error, "rpotect" should be "protect"
I am loving your comic so far ^_^

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unluckyduckie [2013-07-30 17:21:37 +0000 UTC]

Consider changing "He could easily catch the cold if temperature drops." to "He could easily catch a cold if the temperature drops." or "If the temperature drops, he could easily catch cold."

Great as always. 

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Angelica010 [2013-07-14 11:54:01 +0000 UTC]

i love this comic

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ChloeLeeRogers1997 [2013-04-27 01:28:34 +0000 UTC]

Your comics are so beautiful!!

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Devikel [2013-03-21 20:34:01 +0000 UTC]

I can help you edit the grammar in your comics if you'd like the help.

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MALLRATS2005 [2013-02-27 05:53:44 +0000 UTC]

you said to tell you i dont know if any one else has or not but

you have "are you really feel sorry about what you did" should be " do you really fell sorry about what you did"

"now i need you help us to protect donatello" should be " now i need you to help us protect donatello"

^.^ (not trying to be mean trying to help)

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Bindi-the-skunk [2013-01-25 03:06:04 +0000 UTC]

awww pinkie swear thats cute

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Colend [2013-01-23 22:28:09 +0000 UTC]

嗷呜~这个系列好萌>< 有木有中文版呢？

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laqua-emili [2013-01-23 16:57:38 +0000 UTC]

no podrias ponerlo en español?

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Nightcathybrid [2013-01-23 05:25:34 +0000 UTC]

aaaah more more moree is so intense... sorry my english sucks Xd

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juliefofisss [2013-01-23 00:51:20 +0000 UTC]

wow! I love the concept!
Great work with the art!!

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Dr-Innocentchild [2013-01-22 21:51:05 +0000 UTC]

awwww

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kuroxfaixlover [2013-01-22 18:29:34 +0000 UTC]

aw poor donnie! and poor raph too! they both need love T^T

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fairyaya [2013-01-22 17:35:13 +0000 UTC]

awwwww :3

poor don

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ritsukayuki [2013-01-22 15:35:15 +0000 UTC]

This is so... nghhhhh... beautiful...

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Catstudio7 [2013-01-22 15:25:34 +0000 UTC]

I like this new comic!
Would you like to join my group?

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Maxime-Loonatic [2013-01-22 12:36:41 +0000 UTC]

I love this new comic!! CAN'T WAIT TO SEE WHAT'S COMMING NEXT!!!

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Leo-Nita [2013-01-22 09:59:21 +0000 UTC]

Aww poor Donnie :c

I'm so looking forward for more chapters and hope this story has an actual ending. I was a bit sad about Exile not being updated but oh well... that's in the past now.

Also this one has a happy ending I love happy endings!

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Skandron [2013-01-22 09:48:41 +0000 UTC]

I love the way you showed their energy levels - I absolutely cannot wait to see what happens. Thankyou for all your hard work creating this comic tmask! It's beautifully drawn and the story is sweet and sad at the same time. It is wonderful to see you back drawing your wonderful comics again!

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